What do Entrepreneurs wear? Need your advice!

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I'm doing a launch and I need some advice. What do you guys think about my sqeeuze page? Any advice? Anything I should add or take out?

And any Ideas on the shirt? What would you like on your shirt? I love wearing my "Future Millionaire" Shirt.

Thanks in advance,
Choson
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  • Hey bro. Here is my 2 cents. I think that is not a bad squeeze page and I would just do some of the following to make it even better:

    1. The video is no longer available.
    2. The title should have parentheses.

    "Watch Video Below And Learn How You can receive 15 FREE T-Shirts With Your Own Customized Design"

    3. The call to action could be a little stronger. It has to make people want to fill in their name and email address.

    You wrote:

    If you want to get 50% off the "Special Edition"
    Entrepreneur T-shirt or have an AMAZING idea
    for the T-shirt, then just enter your email address
    below:


    I would personally change it to:

    Hurry! Fill out the form below to INSTANTLY claim your 50% off coupon on the "Special Edition" Entrepreneurs T-Shirt!

    Hope that helps!
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    • First you say I can get 15 for free (don't know how cos the video isn't working) then you tell me if I fill in my name and email I'll get 50% off. 50% off what? They're free - or perhaps they aren't.

      And you don't say which country you are in - as in how much will it cost me to have my t-shirt posted to where I live.

      I think if you are going to sell t-shirts you need something a lot more eye catching and artistic than a simple slogan which, let's face it, I could do at home with some iron on t-shirt transfers.

      Get creative man, get creative. I'm sure you can do it.
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