I just finished setting up my new blog

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Greetings
I just finished setting up my new blog: Charly Bird

I would be grateful if you could give me your feedback on my new blog ... including some constructive criticism.

Thanks in advance :p
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  • Profile picture of the author Eager2SEO
    Originally Posted by bareket57 View Post

    Greetings
    I just finished setting up my new blog: Charly Bird

    I would be grateful if you could give me your feedback on my new blog ... including some constructive criticism.

    Thanks in advance :p
    "yafeh meod " (hope i got very nice right).

    Are you trying to sell something with that blog?
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    • Profile picture of the author bareket57
      Originally Posted by Eager2SEO View Post

      "yafeh meod " (hope i got very nice right).

      Are you trying to sell something with that blog?
      Todah Rabah for the feedback (your Hebrew is perfect)

      I'm trying to sell my writing skills and also my items from my online store. I have a friend in Jerusalem who has her own T-shirt production line (trademarked) and I want to talk to her about making some T-shirts with Charly-Bird's logo on it. If things work out then I'll add an Ecwid Store plugin with Charly-Bird T-shirts for sale.

      Be'ezrat HaShem :p
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  • Profile picture of the author Sheryl Polomka
    Very cute - what are your long term plans with the blog - are you going to monetize it at all or is it just a personal blog. I see you have your Ebay listings on there, just wondering if you planned on adding any other monetization.
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    • Profile picture of the author bareket57
      Originally Posted by Sheryl Polomka View Post

      Very cute - what are your long term plans with the blog - are you going to monetize it at all or is it just a personal blog. I see you have your Ebay listings on there, just wondering if you planned on adding any other monetization.
      Thanks for the feedback

      I'm determined to keep my site ad-free. My alternatives for monetizing are:
      * my webstore, eBay and Etsy.
      * my writing skills; here is my first "gig":
      Advertise with Charly-Bird | Charly Bird
      * I'll also check out options for "Charly-Bird" T-shirts.

      I'll take it step-by-step and see how things go, with God's help :p
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      • Profile picture of the author Eager2SEO
        Originally Posted by bareket57 View Post

        Thanks for the feedback

        I'm determined to keep my site ad-free. My alternatives for monetizing are:
        * my webstore, eBay and Etsy.
        * my writing skills; here is my first "gig":
        Advertise with Charly-Bird | Charly Bird
        * I'll also check out options for "Charly-Bird" T-shirts.

        I'll take it step-by-step and see how things go, with God's help :p
        b'vakasha(you are welcome),beseder! I like the Hebrew calendar dates in Wordpress.

        The blog is nice but there still should be some call to action. Its not clear if it is a personal blog or for business. Maybe a graphic on the banner or sidebar that will lead people to your service.

        I'm wondering if there is an affiliate market in Hebrew for Amazon or clickbank products. I wonder if anyone tapped that one yet? I see you have a hebrew wordpress blog! I didn't know it was possible. I know Israeli guys wrote php and they have functions for Right to left text.
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        • Profile picture of the author bareket57
          Originally Posted by Eager2SEO View Post

          b'vakasha(you are welcome),beseder! I like the Hebrew calendar dates in Wordpress.
          Slicha Al HaShe'ela - Ata Yehudi Shomer Mitzvot?
          Wordpress has full support for Hebrew - in fact it's the best blogging platforms for Hebrew I know.

          The blog is nice but there still should be some call to action. Its not clear if it is a personal blog or for business. Maybe a graphic on the banner or sidebar that will lead people to your service.
          Thanks for the advice. My plan is to target fellow parrot lovers (I have a large group of FaceBook and Twitter friends who are parrot lovers). I want to add a page with wikipedia type of information on Cacadus (aka Cockatoos) - when I get round to it. And I want to start doing featured posts on vets, parrot breaders etc. in return for payment - this is both interesting content for parrot lovers and a way for me to monetize the blog.

          I'm wondering if there is an affiliate market in Hebrew for Amazon or clickbank products. I wonder if anyone tapped that one yet?.
          That's a good question - never thought of it myself. Clickbank is absolutely out of the question for Israelis because they don't have a payment option for paypal and the fees for wire transfers and checks from the U.S. to any Israeli bank are so high that it just doesn't pay. If they change their policy on this then they'll gain a large number of Israeli affiliates.
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  • Profile picture of the author 82ana
    I like Charly, he's adorable.
    The blog looks great too. The only thing I would change (visually) would be the banner. Its okay but it doesn't mesh well with the rest of the theme. You are off to a good start.

    Wish you the best,
    Sana
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    • Profile picture of the author bareket57
      Originally Posted by 82ana View Post

      I like Charly, he's adorable.
      The blog looks great too. The only thing I would change (visually) would be the banner. Its okay but it doesn't mesh well with the rest of the theme. You are off to a good start.

      Wish you the best,
      Sana
      Thanks for the kind feedback

      I've just uploaded Charly's first YouTube video :p

      What would you suggest I change about the banner. I wanted something exotic and funky, because that's exactly Charly - exotic and funky
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  • Profile picture of the author Steve Powers
    It's really a nice site, so cute and lovely, but I think the color of background can be changed, of course, everyone likes different colors. An attractive color could affect more visitors.
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    • Profile picture of the author bareket57
      Originally Posted by Steve Powers View Post

      It's really a nice site, so cute and lovely, but I think the color of background can be changed, of course, everyone likes different colors. An attractive color could affect more visitors.
      Thanks for the kind feedback

      What color background would you suggest? I tried to fit the color to the colors in the logo - specifically the exotic flower which looks like a traditional Native American Crown of Feathers. You can see in my video how Charly raises his own Crown of Feathers just like a Native American Chief :p

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  • Profile picture of the author SEO Professor
    My recommedation is to just keep posting relevant articles and try to entice others to make comments on your posts Soon you will see the PR go up.
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