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My 1st attempt with thread

by malchough
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Hi Guys,
l`m a newbee and need some good advice on building a more professional blog,l have just done my 2nd one,but l think l might need more content on them,could you guys be kind enough to check them please and give me your comments thanks,
Malc.
#1st #attempt #thread
  • Profile picture of the author Terri LC
    Hi Malcolm and welcome to the Warrior Forum.

    Your blogs need more content, to keep your visitors sticking around.

    Your 2nd blog has a lot of punctuation and spelling errors (i.e. .So come on guys lets start now,by saving the plant.Clink on the link to your top right.)

    I think you mean planet and Click. Simple errors can cause lost credibility. While you're on blogger, you can click on next blog and see what others are doing.

    Having said all that, I'm not sure if you are supposed to request critiquing............

    Cheers,
    Terri
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  • Profile picture of the author ryanlucht
    Yeah, if you don't format everything properly, from spelling mistakes, to grammar mistakes, to writing style, to spacing and punctuation, people won't see you as very credible. You have to have a good writing style and appear credible in order to make money online. Practice makes perfect though! You can also find resources online to help with your writing and style.
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  • Profile picture of the author PaulMark
    Welcome aboard Malc! Definitely in the right place to get some good advice. Grammar, punctuat!on, and spellin is a gud thang like the otherz say. But don't sacrifice personality bro. It's a great thing too.

    Welcome again!

    Most of all... HAVE FUN!!!!
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