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Help with Email Wording?

by KyleLogue
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I've written quite a few guest posts on other blogs and I've received email notifications of visitors commenting that include their own email address. My aim is to email about 7 key users that have provided great interaction on my articles encouraging them to participate in my own blog and to thank them for their comments.

I want the email to be effective. Here's what I have so far:
Hey guys,
I've hand picked a few of you to contact based on your comments on some of the articles I've written. I've really enjoyed your input, and I'd love to help you in your online ventures. I'd like to offer each of you more personalized information just because you've helped me. All you have to do is ask questions and I'll blast you with everything I know. If you ever need help with designs, authoring, or have any questions, feel free to contact me.

If nothing comes to mind at the moment, no worries. I'll be continuing to write great quality articles at How To Make Money Blogging

Keep in mind that currently, I'm also seeking out authors to help create new exciting content. For more information, visit my blog, and click the "Write for This Blog" menu item at the top of the page.

Thanks for being a great addition to the online community. I mean it!
~Kyle
Feedback? Suggestions?
#email #wording
  • Profile picture of the author KyleLogue
    ...I take it I'm perfect? Awesome lol
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    Originally Posted by KyleLogue View Post

    I've written quite a few guest posts on other blogs and I've received email notifications of visitors commenting that include their own email address. My aim is to email about 7 key users that have provided great interaction on my articles encouraging them to participate in my own blog and to thank them for their comments.

    I want the email to be effective. Here's what I have so far:
    Feedback? Suggestions?
    I would never make it appear as though you are sending that email to a bunch of other people. Thus I would never start the email like this...

    Hey guys,
    I've hand picked a few of you to contact based on your comments on some of the articles I've written. I've really enjoyed your input, and I'd love to help you in your online ventures.
    Keep it personal and one-on-one. No one is going to feel special or be motivated to reply to your email if they think you have sent that same email out to a lot of other people. It devalues the message in the email.

    I would be starting off with something like...

    Hi Simon,

    I'm glad you enjoyed my article 'Article Title' on 'website name'. I love writing these articles and I really appreciate your feedback. So much so that I would like to give back and help you in your online ventures.

    If you have anything you need help with be it designs, authoring, or any other questions at all, please feel free to shoot them over to me and I will do my best to answer them for you.

    If nothing comes to mind at the moment, great! It means things are going well for you. But please remember I am always here to help if you need it.

    Keep in mind that currently, I'm also seeking out authors to help create new exciting content. For more information, visit my blog, and click the "Write for This Blog" menu item at the top of the page.

    Thanks again for being such a great part of the online community. I really mean it!

    ~Kyle
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  • Profile picture of the author KyleLogue
    Thanks for the feedback... exactly what I was looking for!
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