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New Blog Please Critique

by Holiday Car Hire
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Hi,
If you have a few minutes to spare can you please critique a new blog I have built. Hopefully I have followed wiser WSO's tips but can always improve.
The address is http://www.averagepenislength.info
#blog #critique
  • Profile picture of the author JoshuaZamora
    Looks good. It's a first for me seeing a blog in that niche 8) Great overall look though.

    I would highly recommend getting some social sharing buttons on there
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  • Profile picture of the author Michelle Green
    I'd say reduce the height of the header, it takes up a lot of valuable space above the fold. Space that should be used for a call to action of some sort (clicks, opting in, etc).
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  • Profile picture of the author dotlinkmedia
    why not try to make the header image that more attention, such as the niche of your blog.
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  • Profile picture of the author PabloVTB
    I don't like the header image, I can't read the title of your blog that well. And the header image is too tall in my opinion.

    I don't know if I would have chosen the same colors here, it's kinda skin color, a little freaky

    The layout is good, but the box decoration seems too unrelated to your niche, something you would use for an epic blog or something like that, and a little femenine the way I see it

    I would go more "masculine" here, more rough edges, strong colors and stuff. Your site gives me a "soft" feeling and you are talking about increasing penis size, and I would want to see a site that screams "strength" and "power" and that sort of things if I would be looking for ways to increase my penis size
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    • Profile picture of the author Holiday Car Hire
      Originally Posted by PabloVTB View Post

      I don't like the header image, I can't read the title of your blog that well. And the header image is too tall in my opinion.

      I don't know if I would have chosen the same colors here, it's kinda skin color, a little freaky

      The layout is good, but the box decoration seems too unrelated to your niche, something you would use for an epic blog or something like that, and a little femenine the way I see it

      I would go more "masculine" here, more rough edges, strong colors and stuff. Your site gives me a "soft" feeling and you are talking about increasing penis size, and I would want to see a site that screams "strength" and "power" and that sort of things if I would be looking for ways to increase my penis size
      Thank you eveyone for your comments and I have reduced the header height. And PabloVTB, some really constructive critique. After standing back and looking again at the site I had to agree with most of what you have said. If you have time to have another peek I would be most grateful
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      • Profile picture of the author Michael Shook
        Depending on how aggressive you are looking to be in showing ads, you could drop the recent posts widget down below the widget with your banner ad in it.

        That would put the headline question just below your search box. So the entire ad wwould show above the fold.

        Otherwise your site looks really nice, straight and to the point but clean and professional looking at the same time. Nicely done.
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        • Profile picture of the author Holiday Car Hire
          Thank you for your comments I have moved the ad
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  • Profile picture of the author erichammer
    Not sure how well it would work with this particular niche (it's certainly unusual), but I'm thinking the long runs of text would be a little daunting to look at. Especially for men who are interested in this topic, I think you'll want diagrams and maybe even some (tasteful) videos to break up the text so it's not just this long monotony of writing.

    Also, this may just be me, but I found the site loaded painfully slowly at my end. Again, this could be an anomaly, but it could also indicate your shared server is pretty slow...
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  • Profile picture of the author showmegreen
    i don't like info domain,google either
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  • Profile picture of the author sr41056
    The site looks great! Really like the layout and color scheme.

    Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author bigdaddy99
    I think the site looks great, but I'm a bit skeptical of anyone putting averagepenislength.info on their facebook wall

    Also for the dispelling the myths post, I suggest considering having a post with title - the top 5 myths, top 5 ways to drive women insane, etc to get people a bit more "excited" about a posting or two
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