Could you let me know what you think of it?
The Why People Course
I've done far better pitch pages through outsourcing, but I want to make a few sales with this first (had the launch yesterday with decent results) before I put a large mount of money into it.
I also wanted to prove that the advice in the book works by following it to the letter with my sales page.
What do you think of the sales page, what could be improved and remember that I'm trying to keep it completely free, just my time.