Sorry to say your site is too empty .
Money catches Money . So first invest some money also .

I agree... way too empty. Put up more content and make it more interesting. Capture the viewer.

You're trying to make money the 90's or early 2000 way.

The era of promoting file and web hosting are kinda long gone. Think geocities.

Affiliate marketing is one of the fastest ways to earn a nice chunk of cash every day.

Just saying.

I guess it might help if you told us how you would like it to make money?

I cant figure it out. You want ppl to send you videos?

First, in order to be taken seriously, you need your own domain and webhost. I understand you're trying not to spend money -but really, there's no time when a free webhost is better than your own domain. Especially if you're selling something.

The wording/images are somewhat mashed together, it's not completely clear to me what you're selling at first glance.

And often- a Glance is all you'll get from flighty internet visitors.

I suggest getting your own host, your own domain, installing wordpress, and create a site that showcases what you can do for people (really show them WHY they should purchase from you).

If you only need $5 to start - make an account on Fiverr It's very easy - you'll make money in no time.

If you need to make just $5 - there's always Fiverr

Mate, sorry but this its not a website.
a website has a domain, a hostage plan and info.

try to learn more in WF because here you find all info you need to produce a good website.
Regards,
stive

I must say the site look to simple. You should relate the template to minecraft.

IsayHey,

I am not saying this to cut down your efforts. You asked people to "review my site and tell me if you like the look of the site and if you think it has potential." Please be not upset when they tell you the truth.

Sales copywriting is an art, a science, and a learned skill. Nobody is born knowing how to write good sales copy, in the same way as nobody is born knowing how to play music. Learning takes time.

The only message that has even the slightest bit of benefit to a reader of your website is: "If you are struggling with getting your video's views just use this page to promote your video's."

But it is the smallest words on the site! Why are you trying to hide it?

Without a benefit laden headline, expressed in a way people can see it, followed by well written reason-to-buy copy, your site will do nothing. It's a difficult lesson to learn, but it must be learned.

Grab a book called "The Ultimate Salesletter" by Dan Kennedy. It will be a wake-up, and help you see where you need to go with this.

:-Don

Your blogsite is Cool, though you have to listen to the IM's experts. Free site will not give you a stable income. Cause any time it will shut down. You might be regretful at the latter part. Buy domain and invest on that.,

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Your website needs more content and you should add more unique articles about the niche your are working for. It has only one article with a video and its almost nothing for a website/blog which wants to make money and traffic.

i have a blog, if you look at the bottom of my site it says
my blog - then a link
But i have actually made an article here - squiddoo article

I've just checked your rankings and your not in the top #1000 Ranks , for minecraft gameplays

I have changed the title by the way, go back onto my page and then the title is different, shall i make 10 squidoo pages? cos i might aswell? will that help me?

As the other Warriors already have said, you need content.And not just any content will do the job.You need quality content,you need to buy a domain even at the time you are not making any money and your own hosting.If you like to make money out of it, you must be more proffessional.I am pretty sure that if you had installed Google Analytics in your website, the bounce rate must me over 80% and the time that someone remains in your page should not be over 1 minute.

Sorry but you need some more work to do

i understand, but by quality content what do you mean? because there is not much i can put on there really apart from the instructions of what to do and things like that?
I know my plan to try and make enough money to buy a domain by my website is not the best idea but i just want to try it out! i may not even keep it i dont know yet!
Im sure people are probably getting annoyed with me cos i dont want to put money into it but i am going to i just want to make some money first even if its very little..

At least try to invest on hosting and domain name if you are serious in establishing an online business.

i will get google analytics, i shall then research whether you can sell free domains

OR
i could use clickbank to re-sell someone's ebook, obviously i would have to be able to do this, as you can get e-books that say you can re-sell them, should i do this on clickbank until i can afford a domain name?

You need to increase traffic on your site, and it can be achieved by creating valuable contents. Simply cobbling together information from another website will not generate traffic. You need to offer visitors the information they need to achieve a goal, solve a problem, be entertained, find out quality news or have a good laugh.

I HAVE COMPLETELY CHANGED THE SITE!
check the link and i have added tips page with tutorials!
news
forums
And completely user friendly layout!
please check this out, i really like the new design and the tips page!
Please could people tell me what else i could do?
by the way more tips and tricks will be added when i come up with them or find out about them!

well, i've tried my best, and i am constantly updating the tips and tricks page..
what else can i do?

posted another squidoo, anyone got any tips for squidoo?
Second squidoo

well, i have added a few more tips and tricks, what does anyone else think of the new layout and information?

You still need a bit more content.

It's quite boring when you go onto it.

I didn't really understand, but then I am not into games. It looks like a standard affiliate type site that you got for free and its boring as hell...at least for me. I didn't go through every page cause I don't play games. I am on a mission to earn money through true online marketing. But good luck.

hm, i dont think i can do anything about the design? if by design you mean theme, then unless i suddenly become beast at photoshop which wont happen then it wont happen either.. D:
but if you mean by the layout and pictures then i will try and sort that out!
but i need someone who is a minecraft player to come and basically "assess" my site and then give me some tips, and then he could tell me about what sort of pictures to put, i could post on the official forums?
would people do something like that?
like if i post, minecraft player needed to review my site and give me feedback, would people actually do something like that?

Okay then, i shall think about the content and add some more, i will probably publish the updated site in about 2 hours as i dont have much time at the moment!