Ladies, Help Me Out?
It's a sales page for a romance writing course, so you know what I want you to look at. (Those of you who have never thought about writing a romance or those of you who just aren't interested can ignore this request completely).
The page is here: Write A Romance | The Magic Formula Home Study Course For Aspiring Romance Novelists
(I'll delete this page later, just put it here for feedback).
I've removed the order link so you know I ain't trying to get any of you to buy. I just want some feedback on the page. I would like to know if it peaks your interest or if it just completely loses you somewhere...and I'm asking the ladies because generally it is women who read romance, and ultimately consider writing one, even though I know there are a few men in the field too.
Anyway, will you have a look and let me know what I might have left out, or what I might be better off leaving out entirely?
Thanks muches,
Tina
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