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Guys I need your help with my site ---> Tell me what you think

by Andres
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Ok after some time off in the IM world I decided to dive back into it. This time as an affiliate marketer.

Here is my site:
http://www.datingreviewworld.com/

Tell me what you think. Just be straight up with me and let me know what I can do to improve the site.

I plan on putting up a squeeze page quick to build my own list.

Thanks for your help!
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  • Profile picture of the author ericabiz
    Hmm...for a "review" site, it sure seems to be pimping the book...

    If you want to make it look more realistic, add at least one thing you didn't like about the book.

    -Erica
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    • Profile picture of the author Conrad C King
      Find some testimonials from previous buyers and add them, adds a bit more social proof.
      edited due to fumble fingers.
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      • Profile picture of the author Tirmizi
        Looks ok .. to me ..
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        • Profile picture of the author Ricky Parker
          Looks fine man.

          My ? is how is it convertin' for you?
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          • Profile picture of the author Andres
            Sup Ricky - thanks for the thumbs up.

            I just stated marketing the site so I need some time until I begin converting.
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            • Profile picture of the author jhongren
              Hi,

              I have a few suggestions:

              1. the header image is off centered and is misaligned with the blue dotted line.

              2. You can still improve your headline. Spend some time to make it better. You can model some existing products from clickbank.

              3. Put an opt in rather than send them to the sales page. (You lose a potential client and the chance of reselling to them in the future.)

              My 2 cents,
              John
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              • Profile picture of the author Dennis Sim
                I guess many others have just mentioned whatever I want to say.

                But I would like to add one more thing here.

                The image header is yours or you google it? Never ever use the image from the Google - copyright issue...

                -Dennis.
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    • Profile picture of the author Andres
      Erica -

      Thanks I need to tone down the review so to speak and really be straight forward.


      Andres
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  • Profile picture of the author Ryan Gabriel
    -You should tone down on the sell, it doesn't seem like much of a legit review.
    -Include a couple negative points that are of little to no consequence
    -There is a huge section in the middle of your review without any links out to the product. I would change this, however I think the review is a bit long anyways. You might think about a shorter review that gets the viewer moving towards the product site quicker.
    -Your navbar on the left could be a little better explained. It's difficult to tell which are products, which links are internal, etc. Clarify what each link is better.
    -I would suggest any link that does not send your visitor to a sale page where you could make $ open as a new tab/window.
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