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Does this Sell?

by techservice
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Hi all

I've got a new CB product up in the personal development niche.
If anyone has 8 mins to review the sales video and offer your opinions that would be appreciated. It’s had few sales but very low traffic at the moment.
#sell
  • Profile picture of the author Flyingpig7
    Hello Tom

    I watched your video it was not immediately clear to me what this ebook is about until 4 to 5 minutes into the video, I'm not sure that viewers will wait that long to find out what this can do for them.
    I am guessing that this is a religious book and should be marketed as such.
    I wondered if on the website you can bullet point the benefits to the viewer, reasons they should buy this ebook .
    I 'm not a sales person so these are my gut impressions of what I'm looking at I hope they are some help to you.
    Good luck with the new CB project Tom.

    Cheers
    Keren
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    • Profile picture of the author techservice
      Thank you Keren. Really appreciate your comments and time.
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  • Profile picture of the author johnny5skinner
    Hey Tom,

    I agree with Keren completely, the sales page lets the product down I'm afraid, they maybe need a different narrator other than the writer. Essentially you need to capture people in the first two minutes in my experience. CHANGE THE SALES PAGE!!
    Sorry, but you need honest feed back

    Johnny
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  • Profile picture of the author Dave90210
    I agree the sales page needs allot of work. You need some text and a nice font that stands out and captures peoples attention. You need more than a video alone to sale a product
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    • Profile picture of the author techservice
      Thanks Dave but I would say that a number of big marketers do use just a video. Lee Mcintyre for example. Am looking at the text.
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      • Profile picture of the author Shaun OReilly
        Originally Posted by Tom Bartlett View Post

        a number of big marketers do use just a video.
        Just because other marketers may use video only
        doesn't mean that it's going to work for you.

        You need to split-test video only vs. text only vs.
        video + text to see which option is best for YOU
        and YOUR MARKET.

        Regarding the page, I'd recommend having at least
        a big headline that highlights the major benefit of
        your offer.

        If you want to get more people to buy from you, then
        you need to get to the point from the outset and engage
        visitors throughout.

        Dedicated to mutual success,

        Shaun
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        • Profile picture of the author techservice
          Back to the drawing board then.....thank you for your comments.
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