Need review/suggestion for my landing page

by WinsonYeung

Posted: 18 years ago 5 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

Hi,
I has been more than few months since i attended Even Workshop.
I have decided to come back to affiliate marketing.
This is what i have done.

Find a product in clickbank : FatLoss4Idiots
Do a keyword research on weight loss
Purchase a domain : advancedweightlossformula.com
Order a articles based on the keyword research that i have found
Set up aweber follow up emails
Finalize the content in Advanced Weight Loss Formula - Lose 9 Pounds Every 11 Days With This Ultimate Weight Loss Formula
Outsource the head and footer (not satisfied at the current graphic)
Set up google adwords campaign yesterday.

Currently, the site is not receiving any leads, what can i do to boost it ?
On top of that, what do you think of the landing page at Advanced Weight Loss Formula - Lose 9 Pounds Every 11 Days With This Ultimate Weight Loss Formula ?

is the length of the landing page suitable ?
Thanks

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Jamie Iaconis 18 years ago

Hi,

I also think the graphics could use changed, although not so bad...

I do like the sub-heads though... they stand out really well.

Jamie
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imaddict 18 years ago

Quick suggestion... take an axe and chop off that header immediately!
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- Jamie Iaconis 18 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by imaddict
  
  Quick suggestion... take an axe and chop off that header immediately!
  
  Yes, that is a good idea...
  
  Also, let me suggest if you do that, make the
  headline a regular one, instead of a graphic.
  
  Jamie
  
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Rob Canyon 18 years ago

Wilson,

numbers or percentages will help...

1. are people getting to your page from google adwords,
2. what is Jennifer holding in her hand,
3. your opt in page should probably be entirely above the fold (as least shorter),
4. proof sells in the weight loss market, where's your proof (ie hot bodies)
5. weight loss market does not want a newsletter, they want solutions
now, (so how about a free ebook) (and a graphic of the ebook)

Cheers,

Rob

P.S. Don't tell your visitors where you'll be redirecting them, let the sales
letter of that site do the work.
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WinsonYeung 18 years ago

Hey guyz, i have changed the header, please help me review it again
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