My first sales page

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Having spent hours, no months reading and watching WF stars I have my FIRST sales page and would appreciate comments and advice from the money making copy writing gurus here...thank you for your time!!!

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  • Congrats for taking action! So few do. However, it won't work if you expect Google or any other search engine to find it. The articles are all graphics. Search engines don't read graphics very well. Also, those articles should be in multiple pages with meta tags, titles, and headings optimized for each subject. This will give you a much more organized site with far more search engine reach.

    My best wishes on your new journey.
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  • It's a great start man..


    You could also try split testing some copy.. arranged in this order..
    • Main headline needs a promise / attention grabbing statement
    • Bring attention to the problem you're solving
    • Provide your solution
    • Show what qualifies you to help them
    • List the benefits
    • Provide testimonials / social proof
    • Present your offer
    • Add genuine scarcity
    • Provide a guarantee
    • Remind them what will happen if they don't purchase
    That's what I'd do anyway, works for me and it might work for you. It might not... but test, test and test some more it and tweak as you need to. Good luck to ya.
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  • One thing I would definitely add is some before and after photos. People shopping for beauty/weight loss products LOVE those.
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    Having spent hours, no months reading and watching WF stars I have my FIRST sales page and would appreciate comments and advice from the money making copy writing gurus here...thank you for your time!!! Page is Here