A critique of my request for mentorship.

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Hey all, bellow is the latest draft of a letter I am using to hook up with a mentor.
It would be helpful to get some insight from a knowledgeable community like you.
So fire away, but please make an effort to be constructive, I'm a little nervous.



Hi, my name is Brian Brainerd. You are probably wondering why I'm contacting you. The full answer is a little too long for this communication, but the cliff notes are:

*I am a public school employee who wants to be an Internet marketer.
*For the past 3 years this dream has been just that a dream.
*I am looking for a successful Internet Marketer to emulate and act as a mentor.

I am not a completely new to the field. While I haven't done anything substantial, I have been studying the field for some time. You wouldn't have to teach me the jargon, I'm just looking for someone that can help me see the day to day operations of your business and ask questions of when I'm stuck.

Hopefully you will be someone here in Portland OR so we could meet in person sometimes, but I would just be really happy if you were someone who wanted to help. I am willing to do intern tasks in exchange for help so that I wouldn't be a burden on your time.

I have a plan right now I am working hard at executing, but I am running into road-blocks and distractions. I understand that this will take real effort and a chunk of time on my part and want to reassure you that your time wouldn't be wasted helping me.

If you have read this far then I sincerely thank you for your consideration, time and willingness to entertain the idea of helping.


Cheers,

Brian Brainerd
staktdex@gmail.com

"Fortune favors the bold." ~ Virgil
#advisor #critique #mentorship #partner #request
  • Profile picture of the author webapex
    * I'm a frustrated civil servant committed to making a change.
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    “An expert is a person who has made all the mistakes that can be made in a very narrow field” Niels Bohr

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  • Profile picture of the author E. Brian Rose
    Who is it that you are trying to impress? Is your target mentor a famous IMer? Does he do public speaking? If so, find out where his next event is and have an original gift delivered to his hotel room.

    Make sure it is big and wacky. A giant chocolate golden goose is a memorable gift. Or how about a toilet seat cover? You could attach a note that says, "I'm tired of flushing my talent away. Call me."
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    Founder of JVZoo. All around good guy :)

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  • Profile picture of the author Staktdex
    Webapex- That is an excellent idea, I will make that change

    E. Brian Rose- It's not someone specific, I'm just trying to find someone who is doing it as their sole means of support. So far my plan is to try to find someone local on linkedIn.
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    Aspiring Marketer.

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