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Trying To Create A Squeezepage "Money Making" Niche

by Jaxi
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Hi there fellow warriors, so i have been doing some email marketing for about a year now in the dog training and fitness niche, but i thought i wanted to try something new. So i thought, why not the "money making" niche? well i created a squeezepage with profitstheme in wordpress
here is the link http://vampirediaries.x10.mx/wordpress/?page_id=8
So please give me some feedback.

How Could I Improve The Layout?
How Could I Improve My ****ty Copywriting?

also, the domain the site is on right now is just a free domain i use for testing before i buy anything.

Thanks
- Jonas
#create #money making #niche #squeezepage
  • Profile picture of the author 1million1
    You won't completely know until you split test the site.

    I would get rid of the bullet points
    And change the headline to something like

    "Free video Shows YOU the secret Formula I use to go from a complete newbie in internet marketing to making $500 a day"

    Also I would take away getting instant access to your video on the next page. They could put in a fake email to gain access to your info. You want to build a list that responds to you, not a list of fake emails.

    I'd have something like "You'll be emailed direct access to this top secret information immediately"
    That way you have a better chance if getting a real email address and them confirming their email address if you use confirmation on your list.

    Just my 2 cents, like I said test it and see.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jaxi
    wow, thanks 1 million! yeah, i am doing 2x opt-in so that wont be a problem, ill just have to change the text to something like what you mentioned
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Hess
    Jonas - you're asking for information on how to create a squeeze page in the "money making" niche, yet 2 of your bullet points state:

    - Amazing Squeeze Page Templates Included!

    - Learn How To Build A KILLER Sales Funnel, And Make The Most Out Of Every List Subscriber!

    And you're asking...

    How Could I Improve The Layout?
    How Could I Improve My ****ty Copywriting?

    The template you provide should take care of the layout issue... take your own advice/templates...

    Writing copy is part of building a "KILLER" sales funnel...

    The overall appearance of your page looks good though...
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  • Profile picture of the author Troy_Phillips
    Looks to me if this is a fake it till you make it ploy. Everything you are asking advice about on here is supposedly taken care of with your own system. Have you read your own product? If so .. apparently it doesn't work.

    Not trying to be a hard ass but .... okay .. maybe I am. The make money online niche should be treated as a life and death niche for the fact .. if you are pushing BS .. the buyer could easily find themselves sleeping in a car.

    Troy
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  • Profile picture of the author Jaxi
    well like i said, i have been doing squeezepages for other niches like fitness, i do know how to build sites like these, i was just asking for some info on the money making niche
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Hess
      Originally Posted by Jaxi View Post

      well like i said, i have been doing squeezepages for other niches like fitness, i do know how to build sites like these, i was just asking for some info on the money making niche
      Take the same kind of principles you use in that niche, and apply them to the MMO niche.

      You'll find the customers wants/needs are similar... both niches are solutions driven, people spend money on products to better themselves/situation.

      Tie that into a squeeze page, and you should see a decent conversion rate...
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  • Profile picture of the author Big Al
    Some cool posts here...

    I'm wondering why have the header "Complete Business in a Box" but then refers to a video course. Just find it a little conflicting. Is it a business or is it training...

    Agree with 1million1 on testing.

    Personally I'd try testing adding an opt-in box below the bullets and I'd also try removing the bullets and header. Just leave a strong headine with some deck copy and an arrow pointing to the form.
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    • Profile picture of the author magnates
      I agree with one in 1million1 as well

      You don't want tire kickers . Ofcourse you should test to see how things really work .You don't want fake emails so a double opt-in is great for most niches .

      If they can't be asked to go to confirm their email , they are probably not going to open your mails anyway .
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      • Profile picture of the author Troy_Phillips
        I see advantages for both double and single opt in although I only use single. There should be no difference in actual open rates as it is always smart to deliver whatever the bait might be via email.

        Troy




        Originally Posted by magnates View Post

        I agree with one in 1million1 as well

        You don't want tire kickers . Ofcourse you should test to see how things really work .You don't want fake emails so a double opt-in is great for most niches .

        If they can't be asked to go to confirm their email , they are probably not going to open your mails anyway .
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  • Profile picture of the author Brian Terry
    I would completely remove the header panel. It distracts from your headline and ads nothing of value to the offer. Brown is also the wrong colour for the market you're going into here. If you have to have a header I would use green because of it's association with money.

    When you remove the header you'll be able to show more of your copy above the fold of the page. There will be less scrolling for people.

    Also you have a huge chunk of white space below your optin box. It looks like something is missing. If you added another 4 bullet there you'll have more to tell people and more opportunities to persuade (the more you tell the more you sell).
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  • Profile picture of the author jewin
    What about an intro video or testimonial videos in the whitespace? The layout really doesn't have any energy. If it's a video course, then why not at least have some screen caps of the videos and a teaser on there?
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