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highrank

13 years ago

*/ Removed my rather mean comment suggesting that nyboy was a bot

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Tim3 13 years ago

Originally Posted by highrank

Grammar would be a good place to start. That, and not being a bot.

EDIT: why am I talking to a bot :/

This dude is no bot, I got a reply from him after telling him not to hijack another thread.
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nyboy

13 years ago

Originally Posted by highrank

Grammar would be a good place to start. That, and not being a bot.

EDIT: why am I talking to a bot :/

There Is Nothing Wrong With My Grammar And I am Not A Bot, When You Wrote This reply I Was In The Middle Of Fixing The Lay Out, I Wrote It In Microsoft Word And copied And Paste In Thread, It Did Not Look Right When I pasted It So I Fixed It, Sorry You Read The Bad Post Layout, But I made The Corrections, Also Keep In mind I am New To warrior Forum, My Question to you is can you help me with any ideas to my question.

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sbucciarel

Banned 13 years ago

Originally Posted by nyboy

There Is Nothing Wrong With My Grammar And I am Not A Bot, When You Wrote This reply I Was In The Middle Of Fixing The Lay Out, I Wrote It In Microsoft Word And copied And Paste In Thread, It Did Not Look Right When I pasted It So I Fixed It, Sorry You Read The Bad Post Layout, But I made The Corrections, Also Keep In mind I am New To warrior Forum, My Question to you is can you help me with any ideas to my question.

Actually, there's a lot wrong with your grammar if you are targeting the English speaking/writing world. Very hard to read your post with no punctuation or paragraphs and incorrect capitalization in sentences, etc.

Which brings me to your ebook. Who is writing it? Anyone checking it for errors like above?

You can sell your ebook in the WSO forum. You join the War Room for $37 and then you can post in the WSO forum for $40. It will also cost $40 to bump it back to the front page when it reaches page 3.

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lakshaybehl

13 years ago

Originally Posted by sbucciarel

Actually, there's a lot wrong with your grammar if you are targeting the English speaking/writing world. Very hard to read your post with no punctuation or paragraphs and incorrect capitalization in sentences, etc.

Which brings me to your ebook. Who is writing it? Anyone checking it for errors like above?

You can sell your ebook in the WSO forum. You join the War Room for $37 and then you can post in the WSO forum for $40. It will also cost $40 to bump it back to the front page when it reaches page 3.

Yeah...

Learn it from Suzanne, nyboy.

She knows how to write. She knows how to make her content readable. And she knows that she knows.

And best of all... she loves to flaunt it.

-Lakshay

P.S. Suzanne... all this is in good humor, right?

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nyboy

13 years ago

Originally Posted by lakshaybehl

Yeah...

Learn it from Suzanne, nyboy.

She knows how to write. She knows how to make her content readable. And she knows that she knows.

And best of all... she loves to flaunt it.

-Lakshay

P.S. Suzanne... all this is in good humor, right?

I am fine with Suzanne's advice on what i should do, "But" I am not the one to flaunt, Bragg, Show-Off or Boast, if you run to fast you will trip, Just my thoughts...

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nyboy

13 years ago

Originally Posted by sbucciarel

Actually, there's a lot wrong with your grammar if you are targeting the English speaking/writing world. Very hard to read your post with no punctuation or paragraphs and incorrect capitalization in sentences, etc.

Which brings me to your ebook. Who is writing it? Anyone checking it for errors like above?

You can sell your ebook in the WSO forum. You join the War Room for $37 and then you can post in the WSO forum for $40. It will also cost $40 to bump it back to the front page when it reaches page 3.

Okay I am Not Here For Criticism!!!! "I just Made A Simple Post" It Does not Need To Be Perfect, If You Wanna look At My grammar Take A look at My Website b4 You Judge Anyone Themarriageinfidelityaffairs.com My Grammar Is Perfect And On Point On My Website And Ebook, All I ask For Was For Some Simple Help And Not To Be Judge Or Criticized But Instead Your Remark Made Me Feel Like I don't Know How To Write And That You Write Better Than Me; A Very egotistical Statement You Made!!
Don't Ask To Be Understood Ask To Understand And What I mean By That Is, All I Ask was A simple question For The Thread To Understand, Not To Be Criticized on Self Centered Thoughts, Well Anyway Thanks For Your Reply And Help And I am Sorry I Had To explain Myself In That Way...

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Alexa Smith

Banned 13 years ago

Originally Posted by nyboy

If You Wanna look At My grammar Take A look at My Website b4 You Judge Anyone Themarriageinfidelityaffairs.com My Grammar Is Perfect

I have it open now.

The subject of the third sentence is "dealing", and the verb is "are". Should that be "is", do you think? That sentence ends with a comma instead of a period. I could go on, but I won't ...

I'm not trying to be unkind to you, but if you think your grammar is perfect, you have a little to learn. It would really help you a lot to have someone proofread your whole site.

The difficulty with your posts here is that You Start Every Word With An Upper Case (Capital) Letter And That Makes It Terribly Difficult For The Eye And Brain To Read It. Even some people pretending to be copywriters have learned this, these days, and no longer play that trick in their screaming, bright red headlines to put people off reading them. You'd think we might manage it in forum posts, wouldn't you?

Now, let's see if we can be helpful to you. Are you looking, literally, as you say, for place to sell your e-book (there's ClickBank, E-Junkie, DigiResults, Click2Sell, PayDotCom, Amazon, Kindle and loads of others) or are you asking for suggestions about how to draw traffic to your website?

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nyboy

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Alexa Smith

I have it open now.

The subject of the third sentence is "dealing", and the verb is "are". Should that be "is", do you think? That sentence ends with a comma instead of a period. I could go on, but I won't ...

I'm not trying to be unkind to you, but if you think your grammar is perfect, you have a little to learn. It would really help you a lot to have someone proofread your whole site.

The difficulty with your posts here is that You Start Every Word With An Upper Case (Capital) Letter And That Makes It Terribly Difficult For The Eye And Brain To Read It. Even some people pretending to be copywriters have learned this, these days, and no longer play that trick in their screaming, bright red headlines to put people off reading them. You'd think we might manage it in forum posts, wouldn't you?

Now, let's see if we can be helpful to you. Are you looking, literally, as you say, for place to sell your e-book (there's ClickBank, E-Junkie, DigiResults, Click2Sell, PayDotCom, Amazon, Kindle and loads of others) or are you asking for suggestions about how to draw traffic to your website?

Thanks Alexa for being so kind and I will make the necessary corrections on your advice. What I am looking for is where the best place to sell my ebook, should I sell it on eBay, should I go to infidelity forums Etc... As far as traffic is concerned I am okay in that department. If you have anymore ideas I would love to here it. Thanks again.

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uebomoyi

13 years ago

Perhaps you should focus on targeting the right keywords and driving traffic to your site. You could list your ebook on tradebit as well. In case you really need help with monetizing the ebook, the other thing you could do is invest in coaching which is very helpful in terms of getting on the fast track to making money online.

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nyboy

13 years ago

Originally Posted by uebomoyi

Perhaps you should focus on targeting the right keywords and driving traffic to your site. You could list your ebook on tradebit as well. In case you really need help with monetizing the ebook, the other thing you could do is invest in coaching which is very helpful in terms of getting on the fast track to making money online.

Thanks uebomoyi Ive Already Monetized My Ebook With SEO Keywords Which Was Alot Of Work, I will Look Into Your Ideas Also, Thanks Again..

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Tim3

13 years ago

There you go, why didn't you post it here first?

Now you may get some good replies from the members to help you.

If you ebook has enough content you could try selling it on Amazon, Clickbank or even ebay

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nyboy

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Tim3

There you go, why didn't you post it here first?

Now you may get some good replies from the members to help you.

If you ebook has enough content you could try selling it on Amazon, Clickbank or even ebay

Thanks Tim For Guiding Me In The Right Direction And For Having My Back.

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highrank 13 years ago

lol I am very sorry nyboy, I can see now that you are not a bot!

Please accept my sincerest apoligies.
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- nyboy 13 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by highrank
  
  lol I am very sorry nyboy, I can see now that you are not a bot!
  
  Please accept my sincerest apoligies.
  
  Apology Accepted, No Hard Feelings On My End At All, I Feel Like Everyone Has Been Hard On Me Because I am New To warrior Forum, But That's Okay I guess I have To Crawl B4 I Walk And Build The Trust within The Forum, I Just Need Some Help Or Ideas On How To Make Money With The Ebook I am Writing, I Been Doing Internet Marketing For 9 months Now Almost A year You Can Say, Just Needed Some Feedback And Help.
  
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IM Godfather

13 years ago

my suggestion would be to search out other sites doing the same or similar things in google.. specifically other sites that are totally content based (making money with adsense).

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nyboy

13 years ago

Originally Posted by IM Godfather

my suggestion would be to search out other sites doing the same or similar things in google.. specifically other sites that are totally content based (making money with adsense).

Thanks Man, I will Take That Advice In Also.

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DABK

13 years ago

Originally Posted by nyboy

Hey Fellow Warriors, I am Fairly New to Internet Marketing I've Been Doing It for about 9 Months With Very Little Luck, I guess I threw My Self Out There in the Beginning without No Knowledge At All Thinking I can Write Articles Or Promote Products On Click bank and that I will Make Money Pretty Quickly, Boy Was I in For a Big Surprise, I put myself in the Water without Learning How to Swim. I had Many Endless Nights Without making money, but the beauty in this is that I've learned so much in 9 Months that I didn't know b4 and I am still learning, I only wish what I knew now I knew then when I First started, But Anyway to make a long Story Short I am In the Relationship Niche and I've Built My Own site themarriageinfidelityaffairs.com I am currently writing An E book on infidelity and I need Some guidance on where I can sell it besides my own website, I would like to make some money on this EBook I am writing but I just don't know where to put it, is there a relationship forum out there where I can put this eBook? Can I post It Here in Warrior Forum? I wish I had The Answers to My Questions "But" I Don't Know. You're Help and Feedback Is Needed. Thank You...

What qualifies you to write an ebook on marriage problems?

Not a mean question. But if you have proven success fixing such or have a partner who's a certified marriage counselor, you might want to give the book away to generate leads.

If the ebook is the highest you can go (you can't sell counseling or coaching), amazon.com, as suggested, is a good option. Another option would be to contact people who deal with people who have marriage issues (doctors? pastors?) and see if they'd let you sell your ebook on their sites.

Or you could go to places where they have classes for adults (like the Discovery Center in Chicago), where you'd give a 1 hour class (or 6, one a week), on aspects of your ebook, then sell them the ebook. Or contact such places and see if they'd sell your ebook (which you'd have to print) and split the proceeds with you.

Basically, go to places where people with marriage problems go that don't directly compete.

And, as suggested, don't forget keywords.

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nyboy

13 years ago

Originally Posted by DABK

What qualifies you to write an ebook on marriage problems?

Not a mean question. But if you have proven success fixing such or have a partner who's a certified marriage counselor, you might want to give the book away to generate leads.

If the ebook is the highest you can go (you can't sell counseling or coaching), amazon.com, as suggested, is a good option. Another option would be to contact people who deal with people who have marriage issues (doctors? pastors?) and see if they'd let you sell your ebook on their sites.

Or you could go to places where they have classes for adults (like the Discovery Center in Chicago), where you'd give a 1 hour class (or 6, one a week), on aspects of your ebook, then sell them the ebook. Or contact such places and see if they'd sell your ebook (which you'd have to print) and split the proceeds with you.

Basically, go to places where people with marriage problems go that don't directly compete.

And, as suggested, don't forget keywords.

Thanks, The Best Advice And Guidance I've Gotten

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kimjox

13 years ago

Go to big boards and find big forums related to you niche ! good luck

Kim

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nyboy 13 years ago

Originally Posted by kimjox

Go to big boards and find big forums related to you niche ! good luck

Kim

Thanks Kimjox!!! I would Look Into That.
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lakshaybehl

13 years ago

@ nyboy

1. If you really feel people have been kinda harsh... then try using a name inside your posts, and consider using your photo as your avatar.

2. Join the War Room. There is a subsection called "My ideas, strategies". Read up all the posts inside there... shouldn't take you more than one or two days. Then think. You will come up with some really cool ideas. i know I did.

-Lakshay

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nyboy

13 years ago

Originally Posted by lakshaybehl

@ nyboy

1. If you really feel people have been kinda harsh... then try using a name inside your posts, and consider using your photo as your avatar.

2. Join the War Room. There is a subsection called "My ideas, strategies". Read up all the posts inside there... shouldn't take you more than one or two days. Then think. You will come up with some really cool ideas. i know I did.

-Lakshay

Thanks For The Pat On The Back Lakshay, I Will Definitely Take Your Advice.

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