Can Anyone Give Me some Advise for my site

by Kom
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Though advertising does not mean selling of products and services but it helps in increasing your sells. In general to make business more popular within the circle of potential buyers. Increases profit, advertisement can turn as good boost in earnings.

This description of my site ,please take alook and give me some advice before what need to fix

Fastcatcher.com


Please

Thank you In advance
#advise #give #site
  • Profile picture of the author Kom
    All FEEDBACK IS WELLCOME
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    • Profile picture of the author siebert
      You need fresh content For your website.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dennis Wagoner
    You need to hire a competent English speaking writer.
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  • Profile picture of the author paulosully
    Not even sure what your site is about.
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  • Profile picture of the author mcmark
    The best thing to do is to hire English writers. I would suggest you go to Craigslist Philipines copywriters. Let them know the content you want on your site and have them write for you. As of now, (and I am being nice), I have no idea what the web site is about. The grammer is wrong. what is site about? Dog catching? Ipad?

    As a reader, I am totally lost. Figure out the correct purpose of your website and then get some help with copy writing. I hope that helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author YasirYar
    Outsourcing will be a good idea for you. There are several sites that you can go to for this, like Elance, vWorker, Odesk etc.

    The amount of money that you are willing to pay will determine the quality of writers that you get. Remember that you never get a second chance to make a first impression, so your site has to look professional or no one will ever take you seriously.
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  • Profile picture of the author talfighel
    Your site is very confusing. I am not sure what you are trying to sell.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kom
    Mysite will about everything to help people to advertising them small business . Then ofcourse will confusing why you not confuse with ebay
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  • Profile picture of the author ejb2059
    Learn to speak / write PROPER English when targeting English speaking viewers .. The site is confusing and poorly written

    Rev
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  • Profile picture of the author Kom
    It is true , with part that very poor english can you give me example please , for this momment i am not saliing anything yet . Why don't you try the form for advertising you may see my idea there
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  • Profile picture of the author LondonPaladin
    The questions you are asking here are hard to understand because of your English skill level. You should consider building a site in your native language first and then try a foreign language.

    Is your site supposed to be like ebay?

    Can you tell us what site you are trying to copy or look like? Right now the site makes no sense.
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    • Profile picture of the author Kom
      I am learning php code make form so this is free advertising in general, when you advertising here you will posted online just want help people for advertising for free , for this momment free
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  • Profile picture of the author George Curtis
    Kom,

    In addition to the other advice given by Warriors about the content...

    1) You slogan: "Though advertising does not mean selling of products and services but it helps in increasing your sells. In general to make business more popular within the circle of potential buyers. Increases profit, advertisement can turn as good boost in earnings."

    does NOT resonate with me... it needs to be shortened or totally eliminated.

    2) You need a professional, nice-looking logo and then "brand" your site around that logo. As the warrior said earlier... 1st impressions are important.

    Good luck.
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    • Profile picture of the author Kom
      Originally Posted by George Curtis View Post

      Kom,

      In addition to the other advice given by Warriors about the content...

      1) You slogan: "Though advertising does not mean selling of products and services but it helps in increasing your sells. In general to make business more popular within the circle of potential buyers. Increases profit, advertisement can turn as good boost in earnings."

      does NOT resonate with me... it needs to be shortened or totally eliminated.

      2) You need a professional, nice-looking logo and then "brand" your site around that logo. As the warrior said earlier... 1st impressions are important.

      Good luck.
      Thank , for advice

      Any why My target is general , free advertising , so actualy not spesific Target , in way i am agree with you , so please for kind give me a sample word for replace please ....

      thank and this will answer all of question from family warior who asking about what my site talking about.
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  • Profile picture of the author gushy0202
    I did not understand what the site is about... Free ad place or a site that reviews tech products or....???
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    • Profile picture of the author Kom
      Originally Posted by gushy0202 View Post

      I did not understand what the site is about... Free ad place or a site that reviews tech products or....???

      FREE ADD PLACE My friend
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  • Profile picture of the author Kom
    I am not Try to making money from this forum, I need to get best improve word from this forum who was experience for best word.

    like slogan said, "simply the words most powerfull"

    Thank for advice
    I will glad to get more advice from any avenue
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