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Feedback for a Squeeze Page

by Willie Murray
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Hi Warriors,

I'd be very grateful if you could provide some feedback on a first draft squeeze page for a dating project I'm doing with a friend. Main objective is to pull in registrations.

I've attached the image of the squeeze page, I'm on vacation at the moment but will check in with the thread later, be as critical as you possibly can be, many thanks.

William
#feedback #page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author tahoecale
    well it just looks like a scam site.. sorry.. but it does to me.. theses site are 1 in a billion and its going to be a hard niche to profit in only thing i can say is redo the whole site and go with something that looks more legit i mean your up against sites like match.com ect...
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  • Profile picture of the author Willie Murray
    In which way does it look scammy? It's only a squeeze page dating engine on the back end is separate... and we'll be specializing in 1 sub niche of dating not dating in general.

    Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author kevinhdavis
    Originally Posted by Willie Murray View Post

    Hi Warriors,

    I'd be very grateful if you could provide some feedback on a first draft squeeze page for a dating project I'm doing with a friend. Main objective is to pull in registrations.

    I've attached the image of the squeeze page, I'm on vacation at the moment but will check in with the thread later, be as critical as you possibly can be, many thanks.

    William
    Attached are my thoughts.

    Thanks,
    Kevin
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  • Profile picture of the author kevinhdavis
    Here's a better image with my comments:


    Thanks,
    Kevin
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    • Profile picture of the author Jon Patrick
      Kevin has given you some solid feedback there. I thought the security logo in the customer testimonial was particularly odd. Don't be afraid to make the revisions he suggested - it would probably help a great deal.
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  • Profile picture of the author George Curtis
    Willie,

    I agree with most of Kevin's points.

    1) There is NO big headline... "Register Free" is not good enough. Leave it, but place a huge headline above everything else.

    2) Your name, email, etc fields are square, yet your buttons are rounded. Be consistent here. I would choose rounded for everything. A good coder can fix that in about 15 min.

    3) Testimonial on bottom-right looks like it may have been written by a guy. The image is of a girl. Not good.

    4) Yes (I agree with Kevin) the "Why Chooose..." section on the bottom left-hand side needs to be broken up. No more than 2 sentences per paragraph. Bold the "Why Chooose..."

    5) All the buttons are the same color. The main button should be obnoxious and be a different color than the other buttons.

    6) The call to action on the main button is good for you because that is what you want them to do (Complete Free Registration). You need to change it for what is good for the prospect. Perhaps "I Want to Meet Thai Girls Now".

    7) In the bullet points section on the far right... consider bolding every other bullet point. This will make them easier to read and actually get more of them looked at.

    Hope you do well.
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  • Profile picture of the author Willie Murray
    Guys,

    We really do value your feedback, can't thank you all enough and that's why I keep coming back to the WF nothing but solid valuable information Thank you all once again...

    Best

    William
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