The Very First Money Site Ever of mine.

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So I built my first site. That will bring me some good cash. It has a lot wrong in it prohibiting it from actually doing that at this point in time.
The only thing wrong is that I do not have the experience to no what those things are.

If you can hit this site with your knowledge and give some feed back it will
be much appreciated.

Warning: the link below brings you to a site outside of warrior forum. Do not click if are unwilling to help.

Stop Marital Infidelity

PS. Remember this is my very first site.
#mine #money #money site #outside of warrior forum #site #warning
  • Profile picture of the author JimtheWriter
    It is very good for your first website.

    The only real problem I see is with the writing. Some of it is very poor english...

    i.e

    "FIND OUT IF YOU HAVE A GUARANTEED - CHEATING SPOUSE IN NO TIME!"

    "We have also provided you with reviews on what a lot consider the top rated products."

    "Couples dealing with cheating spouse is starting"

    "With people from the internet and all the dating websites, to cell phones and texting. It is no wonder the rates are up and the odds are against the honest hearted."

    and thats just in the headline and the first paragraph.

    If I were you, I would go through your site and fix up some of the errors...
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