VIDEO REPORT (How I Make Money Reselling Electronics)- Reviews Needed Please

Interesting, and here's a few pieces of feedback:

Lose the intro music, or shorten it *a lot*. The intro pictures don't do much to establish credibility early on (for me) because it's out of context. Around 50 seconds in, you're explaining what you've found, and cutting to short stills of those bargains makes some sense - visually backs up what you're saying at that point. At the beginning it's just music and pics.

We didn't get to see or hear from you until 30 seconds in! Lose the background music during your initial pitch and the transition music. Much shorter musical interludes might be OK - 3-4 seconds even feels like too much, but your transition was 8 seconds.

Don't open a browser and have your homepage and such showing - have a browser and clean tab ready to type in.

Use a smaller resolution so that things are bigger on your screen. It's hard to make out things on your screen unless I full-screen your video, and I generally don't fullscreen when I'm browsing.

Script out what you're going to say. This felt like a first draft, and could be tightened up.

This 13 minute video could have been tighter and punchier and been a solid 7 minutes of "to the point" useful information. The problem with video is that you can't easily skim it, and when you umm/ahh/flounder a bit in your delivery and videoing, you risk losing people.

Ack - you asked for is it detailed enough to build your list? "It depends" but I think it probably will get you some people. I don't have loads of video marketing experience on the seller side, I just know what turns me off on the viewer side. There was definitely some useful tips in there, but I felt like they were getting lost, and I suspect you've got more tips you could be giving out too.

All that said, I think the core of what you're doing is good and useful - just would like to see it tighter.

Good luck!

Thank you for your honesty...