Warriors, May I get you opinions?

by Daris Page 11 replies
Hello everyone!

I have been working on a lens on squidoo for some time now and I would like to have some IM experts like yourselves take a look and see if the content is solid.

So far I have had no one to critique it and I'm wondering if I missing anything. I wrote it to help newer marketers figure out what they should do when starting their business in IM and I don't want to give them bad info! lol.

So if you folks would be so kind as to take a gander at my lens and let me know what I can do to improve it I would be most appreciative.

Here is my lens: My Guide To Network Marketing


Thanks so much and have a wonderful day!

Best wishes,
Daris Page
#main internet marketing discussion forum #opinions #warriors
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  • Profile picture of the author Marian Berghes
    well i am no expert in IM so i wont give you anything big. but my opinion is you should write some articles to sites like ezinearticles.com, and you should get some traffic.
    also correct this title in your page:
    Sign Up For My **Newletter** and Get A Free Gift!

    see the mistake?
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    • Profile picture of the author Daris Page
      Originally Posted by Rhypo View Post

      well i am no expert in IM so i wont give you anything big. but my opinion is you should write some articles to sites like ezinearticles.com, and you should get some traffic.
      also correct this title in your page:
      Sign Up For My **Newletter** and Get A Free Gift!

      see the mistake?

      \Ahh thank you! I didn't see that will fix right away
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      • Profile picture of the author Daris Page
        woops just saw my MT OOOOOPS I meant your* lol
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    • Profile picture of the author lindajess
      Originally Posted by Rhypo View Post

      well i am no expert in IM so i wont give you anything big. but my opinion is you should write some articles to sites like ezinearticles.com, and you should get some traffic.
      also correct this title in your page:
      Sign Up For My **Newletter** and Get A Free Gift!

      see the mistake?
      I like it, but I'm no expert either...and I totally agree that ezines is the place to be when you want to generate traffic.
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      • Profile picture of the author lindajess
        Think of it this way, the bigger the article site, the more people go to it for info. If you provide the info that they are seeking, they will go to your page. (And sometimes they'll go to it just to see what you are all about)

        Does that make sense?
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        • Profile picture of the author freudianslip27
          I would suggest doing some keyword research and target specific phrases. You could break off and create other lens/pages on other social sites and all use them to promote this one. That would help your rankings bigtime.

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  • Profile picture of the author napoleonfirst
    You need more content and videos. Also a poll is good.
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  • Profile picture of the author Monetize
    It would help to choose a keyword rich URL such as:

    squidoo.com/Guide-To-Network-Marketing
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