Would anyone mind critiquing my site

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Hey guys, just wondering if any of you wouldn't mind taking a look over a site I have been working and giving your opinion/ feedback on anything you feel needs to be changed?

The url is PLR Panda

Thanks in advance
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    What's in this for me (the customer)? What the hell is PLR anyway? You know and I know, but a lot of people who would benefit from using it don't.

    Your layout is decent, clean. You need to provide a brief explanation of what PLR is and how it can be of benefit to people. Most folks on this board are hip to the benefits of private label rights stuff.

    But out there in the big wide world (where you have TONS of prospects who might want what you have) they have no idea they can use recycled articles to add content to their sites.

    Create a banner or link or something titled "Discover The EXTREME Benefits Of Using Private Label Rights Content" or something like that. Then point that to a page that explains what you have.

    Remember this, a confused mind always says NO!

    Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author webapex
    There's really not enough content there to give productive feedback, I trust lots of package images are coming.

    The various ways the panda is distorted looks sloppy, lets hope the FTC doesn't catch onto the fake testimonials for currently non existent content.
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    • Profile picture of the author rob1123
      Originally Posted by webapex View Post

      There's really not enough content there to give productive feedback, I trust lots of package images are coming.

      The various ways the panda is distorted looks sloppy, lets hope the FTC doesn't catch onto the fake testimonials for currently non existent content.
      The testimonials are from Odesk and Iwriter
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      • Profile picture of the author Canuckystan
        I don't know what you're offering nor what possible benefit there is for me.

        Signing up on the "right hand side" is not going to work at all. If you want people to sign up you'd better do something totally different, e.g., "Sign up now and get ou exclusive ebook -FREE - on how you can make money using PLR" or something like that.

        I also have no idea what the Panda has anything to do with it. I guess Google did a Panda upgrade or whatever, but 99% of your visitors won't make that connection.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rick Tew
    You really should get more on the site before you ask for a review of the site. It's looks like a fresh off the WORDpress shelf
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  • Profile picture of the author onegoodman
    I really not sure what does that mean. I am on the website for over 30 seconds, and can't even give a far shot what is this about ? Panda today mean something related to google. PLR related to products, since I am sure you are not selling GOOGLE PLR Products, I would say change you website name and re-design it.
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  • Profile picture of the author hotboy18
    I agree that it needs a little more content about PLR and how it can benefit your visitors. Explain what PLR is and how it can help improve any business. The layout looks great and I love the images.
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  • Profile picture of the author RobHiness
    Look I do think that this website has future potential. But I recommend starting all over, and "revamping" the entire website including it's content.

    Don't make the first message your visitors see "on this site you will find a range of PLR products for purchase". If that's the first thing your visitors see, it will more than likely be the last thing they will see, sense they will probably leave the page.

    This page has no organization, and it very scattered out! I'm a little confused.

    Thing is, you do have a good site and a chance at success here but it's completely hidden and unorganized. I would seriously recommend compiling all of the responses on this thread and use what you've been told wisely so that when you revamp your site (which I highly recommend you do) then you will have a much better flowing and better converting website.

    There is way to much social media promotion. That can be very annoying to some people, which is harmful to your site because if it annoys people by being brought up to much on your website, people simply won't promote you and give you likes on facebook or follows on twitter.

    I cannot stress enough how important travlinguy's comment is.

    "A confused mind always says NO!"
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  • Profile picture of the author Seth Bias
    I think your site is to cluttered. Also try and make your header a little more clean for some reason it looks stretched. Take that paragraph is on your home page and completely change it. People don't care about your facebook or twitter they want to know what is in it for them. Put out there what a PLR is and make it idiot proof.

    Also there is only 2 out of 15 categories that actually have 1 article. Might want to start flooding in the articles because it took me along time to find the articles you did actually have. Hope these help
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  • Profile picture of the author lakshaybehl
    Originally Posted by rob1123 View Post

    Hey guys, just wondering if any of you wouldn't mind taking a look over a site I have been working and giving your opinion/ feedback on anything you feel needs to be changed?

    The url is PLR Panda

    Thanks in advance
    Why wouldn't I just go to Private Label Rights (PLR), Master Resale Rights, Resell Rights, Private Label Right, plr ebook, video, plr articles. Worlds largest catalog. instead of going over to your site?

    Truth, regrettably is this... there is not value for me on your site.

    -Lakshay
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