Would anyone be willing to give me their opinion about my website?

Regarding the free offer, I am not sure that the free offer is enticing enough to want to opt-in. The #1 tip to make money online is not specific enough and is a bit too generic I think. What are people actually getting? A video? A pdf report? I think it's important to be more specific as people want to know what they're getting before giving up their email.

Hello, Sure.
You need some things.
about me page.
Support page.
Suggest a Policy as well.
Then my suggestion is to have the blog on a different page than the landing page.
There is so many in that niche at the moment that regular text content is quiet tough.
I would suggest A Video with some proof and a opt in form, for the landing page. Since you only got 3-5 seconds to catch the costumers.
look at strategicprofitsCom , something in that style is efficent, and that is my recommendation.
Hope this helps
/Jakup

Thanks! I will keep all of that in mind. A video is a great idea. Can you suggest an good quality audio recording device? When my laptop records video, the audio has a high-pitched background beeping for some reason.

Thank you. I want to have a site that provides as much value as possible but it does make sense that, whether I'm just trying to make a sale or attempting to relay beneficial information to subscribers, I'll never get any if it doesn't catch their attention up front.

if going for a high quality microphone. Look for an condenser-microphones with stand & pop filter & shock mount.
amazonCom/MXL-990-Condenser-Microphone-Shockmount/dp/B0002GIRP2 that is one is popular & cheap.
under $85 for the whole package.

Hi, nice page, If it's a squeeze page I would of just made it simple, plain white, probably HTML or FlexSqeeze. Then really all you need is Big Bold Red Writing to capture there attention and you can create this for free using a free graphic tool. Then maybe just a short list as to why they should opt-in the benifits. A sqeeze page should be kept simple, they are effective.

For the opt-in offer I agree with marcus, its probably not enough for people to want to opt-in. People these days like to opt-in to ebooks and stuff like that, it has to be of value. You can just buy a PLR ebook related to your niche and then rewrite it in your own words, rebrand it. That's the easiest way to create a product for sqeeze pages, or just write up something, make sure it's around 15 pages min. Get a cover design for $5 or create your own cover.

But it's okay for your first Sqeeze page if it is.

Good Luck
Chris.D

I like how you're giving the viewer a ton of different ways to sign up. I have to agree with most people to not have the home page as a squeeze page; unless it has a display of all your most recent content or you're best content. I would suggest having full content displayed on your homepage until the day when you get a lot of returning traffic and decent following.

Also when you launch a blog, I would suggest having at least 10 articles ready to go. release them on a schedule so search engines see it as you regularly updating your blog. Also, I suggest beefing up your free offer. Give away a free report or something. Needs to be specific. I give away a free report detailing how I make money online.

Doesn't have to be much. It can be a few pages. Just needs to be something specific. If you need an eBook cover made, check out fiverr.com... You can get some good stuff done on there for 5 bucks.

Other than that, looks good man. I added you as a friend. We should JV on some articles or something.

Best of luck

Design

Handsome, but a little boring. It needs to be filled out more. I like your color scheme, but I think you could fill it out a little more with a logo and some "share on facebook/twitter/linkedin" buttons.

Content

I personally think they're well written, and readers probably will like them too. Just remember that people have short attention spans and that long paragraphs will turn some readers away. Use more bullet points.

Opt-in

The e-mail opt in form looks great, I'd definitely keep that. However, I echo the comments of one of the above commenters: the bait isn't really enticing enough. As of now, you're offering "the #1 tip." I wouldn't give a way my e-mail address for just one tip, but I would give it away for "weekly tips, tricks, tactics and techniques
." Imply that you're offering MORE NEW TIPS every week, and really big up the tips that you're offering, and you'll do well.