[FOR REVIEW] Coupon Book Marketing
Hello. I am currently targeting coupon books for my product. I have several that are interested in what I have to say and who would like a one paragraph description or pitch. I need some critics on my paragraph. Please be critical. Thank you. Kevin
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When I looked at your subscriber list, I envisioned this new industry through their eyes. I saw a new revenue stream for your business as well as your subscribers. This can go hand in hand with what you already offer.
With over 100,000 Text sent every Second and over 93% of all text messages are opened, T.C.N. will follow in the steps of Groupon & Living Social and plan to dominate The TEXT TO SAVE MARKET PLACE. T.C.N. is one of the first in the industry to go after The TEXT TO SAVE MARKET PLACE.
Participation for you and your subscribers is simple.
Register.
Accept to receive up to 5 text coupons in industries and businesses of your choosing.
Spend 3-5 minutes a day getting the word out about T.C.N.
Open a stream of income.
Again, please understand that I am not here to waste your time and I don't want a dime. I will do all the work. The revenue will come from the advertisers. I am extremely excited at being at the forefont of this industry. I ask that you join me. We haven't launched yet, so I am rapidly building my team. I would love the opportunity to discuss this further with you once you have a moment.
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When I looked at your subscriber list, I envisioned this new industry through their eyes. I saw a new revenue stream for your business as well as your subscribers. This can go hand in hand with what you already offer.
With over 100,000 Text sent every Second and over 93% of all text messages are opened, T.C.N. will follow in the steps of Groupon & Living Social and plan to dominate The TEXT TO SAVE MARKET PLACE. T.C.N. is one of the first in the industry to go after The TEXT TO SAVE MARKET PLACE.
Participation for you and your subscribers is simple.
Register.
Accept to receive up to 5 text coupons in industries and businesses of your choosing.
Spend 3-5 minutes a day getting the word out about T.C.N.
Open a stream of income.
Again, please understand that I am not here to waste your time and I don't want a dime. I will do all the work. The revenue will come from the advertisers. I am extremely excited at being at the forefont of this industry. I ask that you join me. We haven't launched yet, so I am rapidly building my team. I would love the opportunity to discuss this further with you once you have a moment.