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hello warriors
i am a beginner in blogging and going to start my 10 th blog but this is little bit different i am going to make a training blog for beginner on blogspot. i need your help about my content writing style and way of blogging. today is my first post on that blog. may you spend your two minutes to give me suggestion about for better blogging. (i am a creative boy to find money making ideas on internet)
please take a look on about me page and a single post.
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every advice will be highly appreciated.
thanks warriors.
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  • You are a beginner in blogging, yet are starting your 10th blog?

    ....also, now I know people come from all different walks of life with various grasps of the English language...I'm not perfect myself and will let spelling and grammar errors slip from time to time myself....do be very careful to proofread though...

    On top of producing high quality, engaging, content, it is also important that you do your best to ensure that correct spelling and grammar is adhered to, as well.

  • I know everyone is different, but I hate reading content on a black background. It doesn't matter how good the content is, if it feels unpleasant to read it, I pass on by and find another blog.
  • What should I say? Your blog is nice, but your command of the English language isn't. Incorrect sentence structure and use of English does not elicit trust in my eyes; it looks spammy.

    I wish I could help you, but the English needs improvement. Sorry for being so blunt, but you did ask for opinions.
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      I'm going to have to go with Debbie here. It was a surprisingly good layout for a blogger page (much more than I was expecting). Content isn't all that great though.

      Also, don't you think it is a bit unrealistic to want to train newbies to blog when you are a confessed newbie yourself? They don't have privates training new recruits in the military...and there is a good reason for that.
  • Other than your site's grammar, I would totally not use white text on a black background.

    I would also ask myself what the site goals are?

    Do you want to build up an email newsletter subscriber list?
    Are you trying to generate phone calls for coaching clients?

    Please consider these questions....
  • I have to agree with above posts.

    You say:

    "Your content should be looks like a professional with right information and in impressive manner."

    But yet your content does not sound professional.

    I only speak one language so I'm not saying this to be mean.

    But if you're going to present yourself as a professional blogger than you need to hire an editor or at least a proofreader.

    Rose
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    need blogger or experienced IM help!!

    hello warriors i am a beginner in blogging and going to start my 10 th blog but this is little bit different i am going to make a training blog for beginner on blogspot. i need your help about my content writing style and way of blogging. today is my first post on that blog. may you spend your two minutes to give me suggestion about for better blogging. (i am a creative boy to find money making ideas on internet) please take a look on about me page and a single post.