My first Landing Page

Getting a "Page not found error".

"Weight" is misspelled...

The layout is nice and I am a big fan of women's abs so we're good there..

Maybe "10 Reasons To Lose Weight" instead of "10 reasons to lose weight" although I'm not crazy about your headline. It doesn't motivate me. If I am looking to lose weight I already know that I need to lose weight. I only care about the reason why I'm there and whether you can show me an easy way to lose weight fast so I can fit into my prom dress or that hot dress that I bought for the company Christmas party or so I can look hot. Know what I mean?

Oh yeah... and it's "lose weight" and not "loose weight"


Hope this helps... not trying to be critical but you're not really targetting who is going to be looking at your page, what they're thinking and why they're there.

The link doesn't work like this - you missed the http://.

Other than that, check for spelling errors... you made them TWICE in what is your niche about, which comes down to 0% credibility.

Cheers,
Rob

You have attached videos and clicking those videos redirect to the affiliated site. I think adwords do not allow affiliated links

Hi the page is OK:

Blue header title on blue background does not work for me.

Use odd numbers instead of even (seems to resonate with people more) so 7 or 9 reasons!

The image of the woman in white bikini is on a slightly off white so stands out form the white on the actual page.

Your copy is weak - sorry to be critical, if i were to read this and be overweight i would probably click away! it needs to be punchier, hard hitting and pull the emotional cords!

Stop Inventing Reasons You CANT Lose Weight - Shed A MASSIVE 20 lbs Before Your Summer Break! (not strong enough i know but you have to speak to people on their level and tell them what you will do for them - grab their emotions)

A great start for a squeeze page, but a little more work and your sales should improve!

Also dont worry about PPC - look to facebook, twitter, solo ads, banner adverts etc!

My last point you really should be collecting email addresses, so you you can follow up and build a relationship with your buyers or prospects!

Good luck

You are going to want to add a optin form to build your list.

You could say "Enter Your Email Address To Watch The 5 Best
Foods I Recommed To Help You Lose The Pounds Fast"

This will allow you to build your own list

i think page is good but you need to little bit improvement ..as suggest by my warriors friends..

The page looks good. I see it doesn't get too much traffic yet tho. Are you getting sales from this promotion? What is your marketing plan like?