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I Need YOUR Help !

by Mindz
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I been doing online marketing for AWHILE now .
Learn A lot but that's beside the point . I like to
get opinions about what I'm doing so please

check out this site . And tell me whats wrong with it!

All opinions are welcome ! good or bad !!!



http://www.trafficpluscontent.info
  • Profile picture of the author graphic1970a
    Very poor in my opinion.
    Needs more stuff

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    George
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    • Profile picture of the author AmitabhB
      I think thats a squeeze page that you just converted to a sales page. It doesn't work that way my friend . Until and unless you have some good copy-writing skills, I do not recommend you trying to get a sales letter out. It just wouldn't convert.

      The best way that I would suggest would be:

      Get that buy button out (Sorry if I sound rude...but its anyways not going to yield you any positive result) and instead, add an opt-in form in its place to collect the name and email address of your visitors and then offer them with a related product that is already been proven to convert. I think your page should do pretty good as a squeeze page. If not, tweak it and improve it. Monetize your thank you page. Write a good auto responder sequence providing some value to the visitors and get a proven high converting product in front of them. You just can go to Clickbank and find a good related product. then just do one hting...Drive traffic to it! Thats it...

      Hope that helps....
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      • Profile picture of the author Mindz
        Originally Posted by AmitabhB View Post

        I think thats a squeeze page that you just converted to a sales page. It doesn't work that way my friend . Until and unless you have some good copy-writing skills, I do not recommend you trying to get a sales letter out. It just wouldn't convert.

        The best way that I would suggest would be:

        Get that buy button out (Sorry if I sound rude...but its anyways not going to yield you any positive result) and instead, add an opt-in form in its place to collect the name and email address of your visitors and then offer them with a related product that is already been proven to convert. I think your page should do pretty good as a squeeze page. If not, tweak it and improve it. Monetize your thank you page. Write a good auto responder sequence providing some value to the visitors and get a proven high converting product in front of them. You just can go to Clickbank and find a good related product. then just do one hting...Drive traffic to it! Thats it...

        Hope that helps....
        I like honest rudeness !!! and this does help ! But its such a good looking squeeze page ! lol
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  • Profile picture of the author typoo999
    IMO your site is too general, everybody makes the same type of pages (these one page sales pages with unbelievable promises). Smart people don't trust these type of pages anymore.

    Sorry for my negative post, have a good day! :rolleyes:

    Originally Posted by Mindz View Post

    I been doing online marketing for AWHILE now .
    Learn A lot but that's beside the point . I like to
    get opinions about what I'm doing so please

    check out this site . And tell me whats wrong with it!

    All opinions are welcome ! good or bad !!!



    http://www.trafficpluscontent.info
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    Boom shakalaka!
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  • Profile picture of the author magiclouie
    Originally Posted by Mindz View Post

    I been doing online marketing for AWHILE now .
    Learn A lot but that's beside the point . I like to
    get opinions about what I'm doing so please

    check out this site . And tell me whats wrong with it!

    All opinions are welcome ! good or bad !!!



    http://www.trafficpluscontent.info
    Have you thought of posting some testimonials? You may send free copies for review. How could we know that your product is lucrative?
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  • Profile picture of the author Steven Miranda
    Needs a lot more 'meat' aka: content.
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    • Profile picture of the author TBInternetMarketing
      Originally Posted by Steven Miranda View Post

      Needs a lot more 'meat' aka: content.
      Steve is right. You need more of a sales page if you want people to actually buy something. You have to sell them on what they are about to buy.
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  • Profile picture of the author njaad
    Use this page template to give away something for free in return of their email, and then try to sell them something later. This site works as a squeeze, but not as a salespage.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mindz
    I Knew I Need More Content .
    But I Just Wanted To get Away From A BULKY Sales Letter .
    I wanted to try something Different than The normal.

    I knew I needed more though. And I knew I could use it as a squeeze page .
    Just wanted to try something different . And test my results .

    And i done built my freebie list . I'm only looking to build a buyers list ! .

    But i thank you all for your honesty . That's the only way I can grow !
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    • Profile picture of the author magiclouie
      Originally Posted by Mindz View Post

      I Knew I Need More Content .
      But I Just Wanted To get Away From A BULKY Sales Letter .
      I wanted to try something Different than The normal.

      I knew I needed more though. And I knew I could use it as a squeeze page .
      Just wanted to try something different . And test my results .

      And i done built my freebie list . I'm only looking to build a buyers list ! .

      But i thank you all for your honesty . That's the only way I can grow !
      You could do a split testing if you like to see which one converts better.

      Trying to experiment something new is not that bad at all, but sometimes it takes time, money, and effort for you to see the results. Even expect for some frustrations.

      I like the inputs of our other fellow warriors too.

      Cheers,
      Louie Tugas
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      • Profile picture of the author Mindz
        Originally Posted by magiclouie View Post

        You could do a split testing if you like to see which one converts better.

        Trying to experiment something new is not that bad at all, but sometimes it takes time, money, and effort for you to see the results. Even expect for some frustrations.

        I like the inputs of our other fellow warriors too.

        Cheers,
        Louie Tugas
        thats what im preparing to do . Spilt test it . Just wanted to try something new . I'm going to have a sales page written up .

        Any good copywriters, I would like to work with someone different than
        I already have !

        Any suggestions !! ?
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        • Profile picture of the author magiclouie
          Originally Posted by Mindz View Post

          thats what im preparing to do . Spilt test it . Just wanted to try something new . I'm going to have a sales page written up .

          Any good copywriters, I would like to work with someone different than
          I already have !

          Any suggestions !! ?
          For "kick butt" copywriters, you can always check here, Warriors For Hire
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  • Profile picture of the author Mindz
    Going there now . Thanks for all your help !!
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  • Profile picture of the author visimedia
    to be honest, the real concept of a website needs to be clear, your focus will be your concept of website, your content, you have to think in the visitors side... that's not easy, but it's doable if you're not filling your head with "short term cash"...

    If you can fill your head with the right content, concept, to the right visitors, your bank account will be filled with cash in the as soon as possible for a longer term..
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