A little Mistake that Cost A Warrior Thousands of Dollars Per Year...

by Art Peterson

Posted: 13 years ago 44 replies

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hey warriors,

I just want to share with you a little mistake that I had been making.
Once upon a time I used Jay Abraham's 100 best headlines to create all of my headlines.

But... Sigh

I lost it amongst all my thousands of products I have downloaded on my hard drive.

So, I went back to Jay's site to see if I can find it, only to find out Jay has redone his website.

The hundred greatest headlines may still be there, on Jay's site, but I cannot find them there.
So I went on a search and found a PDF version of it

I don't know how long this PDF will be up on this site so you better grab yourself a copy

this is not my site and I don't know who created it, but I sure love them for putting this PDF on the web

100 greatest Headlines

since I like to add value to the warrior forum I said why not share it with everybody to keep them from losing thousands of dollars, just like I did
(the PDF is exactly where I found this headline:p)

so enjoy

here's the link again

100 greatest Headlines

go make yourself some thousands,

Art

#100 greatest headlines #cost #dollars #mistake #thousands #warrior #year

lukedidit

13 years ago

It sounds like it's from the 1950's ' PROFITS THAT LIE HIDDEN IN YOUR FARM'

So I am not getting this? How did not having these headlines to hand cost you thousands of dollars a year?

I do like this one however:

OFTEN A BRIDESMAID, NEVER A BRIDE

Reminds me of Ernest Hemingway:

"For sale: baby shoes, never worn."

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sadiecopywriter

13 years ago

Originally Posted by lukedidit

It sounds like it's from the 1950's ' PROFITS THAT LIE HIDDEN IN YOUR FARM'

Headlines like this are formulas. You're supposed to use them like this:

PROFITS THAT LIE HIDDEN IN YOUR ____________

Put a word there like 'computer' 'attic' or 'errands' and watch what a great response you get. Everyone loves hidden profits.

It's a great PDF. Thank you so much.

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merigot123

13 years ago

Originally Posted by sadiecopywriter

Mercedes said it well. You take these treasures and you become creative, add your spin to it so that they can stand out. These are some of the hidden gems that we at time overlook and miss out on. This is a great resource that one can take advantage of tremendously if you only what you are doing.
Great pdf.
Thanks for sharing

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REHughes 13 years ago

Hey, Art

Thanks for sharing. I have a lot of Jay's stuff, but I had somehow missed this one.

Definitely looks like one I will want to go through and take note of.

Best,
Robert
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biffula 13 years ago

Thanks Art.
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JohnDBrewer 13 years ago

Art,

Thank you for providing a new person with some much needed guidance in headline creation. Do you have any other words of advice?

John
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MaryKathan 13 years ago

Great tips - thanks for the pdf
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planetlubs 13 years ago

Once in a while, a little help comes along at the time when you need it most. I have been tinkering about a title to give to one of my books for kindle. The moment I downloaded this pdf, I got the perfect idea for my title from this pdf.

And for my forum signature

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protectyoursales 13 years ago

This is great! I've been thinking about buying a swipe file lately, since it's about that 'time' for me (I've been feeling rusty with my copywriting =/ ), but this has a ton of gems in it that i can see already, so you probably just saved me a few bucks at least!

Again, great share!
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- John Marshall 13 years ago
  
  Just been and looked at the headlines - always looking for more inspiration.
  
  Thanks!
  
  John
  
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Lexilou 13 years ago

thanks for sharing I just downloaded
Lexilou
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ryanmilligan Banned 13 years ago

For headlines I usually just use:

1. Identify a problem
2. Bold statement
3. A promise
4. Introduction
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PaulyC 13 years ago

Thanks for sharing - successful headlines are always great for sparking new ideas!

Thanks!
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vivi62 13 years ago

Thanks for the share very helpfull
regards
vivi62
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- TerryL 13 years ago
  
  Thanks for the share, Art. That's a great resource. Very helpful.
  
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peptone 13 years ago

Thanks, Art. That looks a really useful book.
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clarest 13 years ago

I was posting earlier about #10 "Do you make these mistakes in English?" by Maxwell Sackheim. Thanks for sharing.
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Jothika 13 years ago

Thanks Art for sharing. I think it will be very useful in future as I tread along the IM road.
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AffScot 13 years ago

Thanks a lot Art. These will definitely come in handy.
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cashtree 13 years ago

This probably should be in the freebie section, but thanks for the share )
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darkblue 13 years ago

Doesn't matter how old are these headlines. The formulas used to create them is still valid and cary the same value and power.

Thanks for a great Resource. I actually saw these headlines on a website a while ago, I bookmarked it, but I lost that bookmark after a windows reinstall.
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Azulthewise 13 years ago

Thank you art will put these to great use!
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- salegurus 13 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Richard6666
  
  Thanks for sharing. I have a lot of Jay's stuff, but I had somehow missed this one.
  
  Hey MORON, You^^^
  You have been busted, copy and pasting
  other peoples posts.
  Report Spammers ^^^
  
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AskWendyWebb 13 years ago

Thanks for posting this. Tucking it away in my files.
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Steve Faber 13 years ago

That's a great swipe file. It doesn't matter how old these headlines are. Headlines play to human nature and base motivations, which have changed little since the Roman Empire, much less the dawn of online marketing.
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- yesacpow 13 years ago
  
  It's a good read.. Many thanks for the link, I already find a few headlines I want to test in some of my niches..
  
  Cheers
  
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nohypo 13 years ago

thanks .useful
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feliciayapsl 13 years ago

Thanks for the share. Great list.
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- Mo Sheikh 13 years ago
  
  Thanks for sharing! Adding it to my IM files... will definitely come in handy!
  
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luckystepho 13 years ago

Hi, thanks for the share, some good ideas here.
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THK 13 years ago

Anything with Jay Abraham's name on it, I am game. Thanks for sharing this

Tanvir
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Randall Magwood

13 years ago

I'm surprised Jay doesn't advertise this for $200 or something lol... all of his products are good, but incredibly expensive.

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Daniel Evans

13 years ago

Thanks! That was a good read!

I though this headline was terrible though!

"When doctors "feel rotten" this is what they do."

Can't argue if it works though!

Thanks
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maximus242

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Daniel Evans

Thanks! That was a good read!

I though this headline was terrible though!

"When doctors "feel rotten" this is what they do."

Can't argue if it works though!

Variations of that headline are among the most successful direct mail packages in the world

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Daniel Evans 13 years ago

Originally Posted by maximus242

Variations of that headline are among the most successful direct mail packages in the world

No doubt, but the adjective is still very unfitting.
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- Art Peterson 13 years ago
  
  wow! I cant believe how many people love this...
  
  I hope this helps everyone of you.
  I must remember to let warriors know I find other cool resources like this.
  
  Thanks
  
  Art
  
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desta80 13 years ago

its great, thanks for it
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geekology 13 years ago

Thanks a bunch. With a little thought, these headlines can be applied to variety of niches.
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TopKat22

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Art Peterson

hey warriors,

I just want to share with you a little mistake that I had been making.
Once upon a time I used Jay Abraham's 100 best headlines to create all of my headlines.

But... Sigh

I don't know how long this PDF will be up on this site so you better grab yourself a copy

this is not my site and I don't know who created it, but I sure love them for putting this PDF on the web

100 greatest Headlines

since I like to add value to the warrior forum I said why not share it with everybody to keep them from losing thousands of dollars, just like I did
(the PDF is exactly where I found this headline:p)

so enjoy

here's the link again

100 greatest Headlines

go make yourself some thousands,

Art

Art, thanks for the share. It is amazing all the valuable information shared on this forum for free.

I can see how you could get real creative with these.

Thanks

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YasirYar 13 years ago

There is a much better way that Ezinearticles offer to their writers which is based on current search pattern and those titles work very well. any one can claim a title and write an article.
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pex7 13 years ago

Thanks for posting this! Also, I like that you used number 2 as the title of this thread
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kdmpublishing 13 years ago

Thanks for the pdf, it is always a good reminder to create a headline that people remember and therefore remember your product.
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Dann Vicker 13 years ago

Nice of you to share this.
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pilotgardens 13 years ago

Thanks, we all I'm sure can use more ideas to help with our sales pages.
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