Do I need more traffic or better sales conversions?

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This isn't a "stereotypical" IM product I'm talking about. This is for physical products. And I might just be way off track, as in, the product might be purely subjective - love it, like it or hate it

So below is what I've been doing for the last three years, and where I am now:

Articles
Blog commenting
Directory listings
YouTube
YouTube video responses
Video distribution
Blog & RSS distribution
Facebook
Pinterest
Tweet
Social Bookmarking
Local paid advertising (craft shows, paid print ads, zilch)
Donated to swag bags for wedding expos for two years
Magazine interview
Press releases
Bonanza, eBay and Etsy (bomb)

Current traffic: approx 5000 page views in the last 30 days
PR2
Alexa 407,441
Google Webmaster tools shows 6,032 links to the site; Alexa says 217 ??

Ranking on page #1 of Google, Bing and Ask for my most relevant keywords (I had a competitor email me the other day; wanted to buy advertising on my site for MY keyword phrase; i.e., my domain name! LOL)

My goal:
Trying to get to a steady average of 5-7 sales per week

Currently, I probably average about one sale a week. :confused: Sometimes, like last week, I had three good orders for gross sales of about $650. Then nothing for a few days or sometimes even a couple of weeks will go by without a sale.

Site is Bookmark Wedding Favors and Custom Laminated Bookmarks for All Occasions

When I splintered off the memorial bookmarks section to their own domain, the page views dipped slightly, but they've since come back up.

My memorial-bookmarks.com site virtually brought its PR2 with it when I moved it so my combined page views for the two sites together is roughly 7,000 per month.

I'm actually beating my top competitors who have been online for several years, so I'm doing something right as far as SEO; I've had no complaints from clients on the ordering process, as I tried to streamline it as much as possible to make ordering easy through PayPal (I don't qualify for a merchant account).

And I've had a couple of recent clients say they liked the videos on the sites because it gave the site a more personal feel than the others they'd visited.

So what other "white hat" or even 'gray hat' tactics can I use next to drive up sales?

I only added the background music - with the player that can be turned off - just a few days ago.

Any ideas, tips, tricks, whatever to make more sales?

Thanks!
#conversions #sales #traffic
  • Profile picture of the author fenixpro
    Hello ~

    I looked at your site and have a couple of thoughts

    - granted it is not an IM related site, but it took me a while to really focus in on your product and message. There are a lot of words and things all over the site in different columns etc. On suggestion would be to clean the site up (and modernize) so it's a bit more to the point and streamlined. A lot of people think of a sales funnel in terms of multiple pages on a site and an email list, but event just having a clearer and more directed call to action and information sharing can be very helpful. I already knew what you where trying to do from this post and it still took me a while to grasp the site.

    - There's not obvious way to find how to order and buy from you right away. And correct me if I'm wrong, but you have to invoice the person via email. A lot of people would probably prefer just to click on something and to order. You are adding an extra step and thus, possibly losing sales.

    - Related to the idea of a list, I don't see any call to action or offer for some sort of freebie or incentive where you can get people on a list. You may only be able to convert 1 - 5% of your visitors, but if you could grab say 10 - 20% and then follow up and develop a relationship with them via an email list, guaranteed your sales would go up.

    To sum it up, at first glance (i only spent about 2 min on your site) it seems that your site isn't really optimized for sales ! I would do some reading and research on site design, copy, and layout as well as other marketing strategies and see what makes sense to integrate with your business. Yes, it is not an IM site so you don't want or need flashy red headlines and bolded print everywhere, but you could definitely improve the overall sales optimization. I don't know about pageviews, but if you had 5K uniques per month, you should be looking at a minimum of 50 sales per month with a properly optimized sales funnel - assuming your product is what people are looking for.

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    • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
      Originally Posted by fenixpro View Post

      Hello ~

      I looked at your site and have a couple of thoughts

      - granted it is not an IM related site, but it took me a while to really focus in on your product and message. There are a lot of words and things all over the site in different columns etc. On suggestion would be to clean the site up (and modernize) so it's a bit more to the point and streamlined. A lot of people think of a sales funnel in terms of multiple pages on a site and an email list, but event just having a clearer and more directed call to action and information sharing can be very helpful. I already knew what you where trying to do from this post and it still took me a while to grasp the site.
      I'll be honest, I'm not really sure how to do that. :confused: Are there things I can move around, put somewhere else?

      Do I need an entirely new format or layout for the site?

      Originally Posted by fenixpro View Post

      - There's not obvious way to find how to order and buy from you right away. And correct me if I'm wrong, but you have to invoice the person via email. A lot of people would probably prefer just to click on something and to order. You are adding an extra step and thus, possibly losing sales.
      No, people have the option to either order directly on the bookmarks pages themselves; there's a PayPal order form on every page, or they can use the non-PayPal email order form if they're going to use a check but don't want to use PayPal.

      I was afraid if I didn't give people the option to not have to use PayPal, I'd be losing sales. I've had a few sales where they asked me to mail them an invoice that they could mail back with a check.

      I'm not sure how to "fix" this unless I streamline everything onto the front page with one order form. :confused:

      Originally Posted by fenixpro View Post

      - Related to the idea of a list, I don't see any call to action or offer for some sort of freebie or incentive where you can get people on a list. You may only be able to convert 1 - 5% of your visitors, but if you could grab say 10 - 20% and then follow up and develop a relationship with them via an email list, guaranteed your sales would go up.
      OMG the dreaded list. ROFLMAO I had a nicely designed Opt-In with a free wedding planning ebook in plain view for about two years. Not even one sign up. Figuring it was taking up space, I took it down.

      I have never been able to get a handle on building lists. I've tried just about everything but nobody ever wants to sign up. They want to get their bookmarks and go back to their wedding, party or funeral planning.

      Since expanding the site two years ago to cover other occasions for bookmarks, I've never been able to come up with a general 'one-size-fits-all' freebie as a list-building incentive either.

      i.e., if people hit the site looking for wedding favors, they're not going to want a freebie about planning a funeral; grandmoms getting bookmark favors for their daughters' baby showers don't need a wedding freebie, etc.

      What kind of a free anything would I offer? I've seriously never been able to get an answer to this question regardless of who I ask.

      So it's "sign up here" - for what? Free information? Well, they can get that right on the site. ROFL

      I'm lost on this point; always have been, because the site is for 'bookmarks for any occasion,' not just weddings.

      Kind of falls into the same category as trying to figure out what to give as a prize for some contest - I don't want to be leaving anyone out.

      But please, throw out some suggestions and I'll see what I can come up with.
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      Originally Posted by fenixpro View Post

      To sum it up, at first glance (i only spent about 2 min on your site) it seems that your site isn't really optimized for sales !
      I believe you are 100% correct because my bounce rate after three years is still about 75% with an average time-on-site of less than two minutes. This is critical!!


      Originally Posted by fenixpro View Post

      I would do some reading and research on site design, copy, and layout as well as other marketing strategies and see what makes sense to integrate with your business.
      Right again. I think I'm going to have to spend some time on one or two of my competitors' sites I guess, or browse some different Dreamweaver layouts. My site is a spin-off of my old SBI "authority" site that I sold a couple of years ago, therefore, all the content!!

      I'm guessing that may not be the best fit for this type of business, huh? :rolleyes:


      Originally Posted by fenixpro View Post

      Yes, it is not an IM site so you don't want or need flashy red headlines and bolded print everywhere, but you could definitely improve the overall sales optimization. I don't know about pageviews, but if you had 5K uniques per month, you should be looking at a minimum of 50 sales per month with a properly optimized sales funnel - assuming your product is what people are looking for.

      According to my research, yes, bookmarks are really gaining in popularity as inexpensive favors and in lieu of prayer cards for funerals. My girlfriend averaged 5-7 sales per week with her former bookmarks site way back over a decade ago, and she was surprised that I was still getting so few sales, especially since there still isn't that much competition.

      I really, REALLY appreciate your overview!! I'm going to have to head back to the drawing board on this one. And if you have time to go through the site any more, feel free to make more suggestions!!
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  • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
    Originally Posted by whitehalls View Post

    You said: "Current traffic: approx 5000 page views in the last 30 days"

    Are you sure? That's extremely little for 3 years of work. Those are not even unique visits but page views.

    Work on conversions as well as traffic - both are important but especially conversions!
    Yeah, I'm sure.

    Analytics stats:
    For wedding-favor-bookmarks.com
    2,600 Visits
    2,359 Unique Visitors
    4,518 Pageviews
    1.74 Pages/Visit
    00:01:06 Avg. Time on Site
    75.46% Bounce Rate
    89.35% % New Visits

    For memorial-bookmarks.com (launched Nov 2011)
    779 Unique Visitors
    1,308 Pageviews
    1.52 Pages/Visit
    00:01:28 Avg. Time on Site
    72.21% Bounce Rate
    88.72% % New Visits

    So a combined less than 4,000 unique visitors between the two sites in the last three years. Pretty FKN dismal.

    Okay, so what do I do, other than what I've already done/am doing? That is, besides updating both entire sites?

    I'm open to suggestions because ya think after three years I'd be doing a hell of a lot better.

    There are 2900 searches per month for 'wedding bookmarks;' 3600 for 'bookmark favors,' and 1300 for 'bookmark wedding favors.' That's not including the searches for specific themes like 9900 searches for 'beach wedding favors' where I'm #11 and #12 on Google. And it doesn't include the searches for non-wedding themes either.

    But yeah, I need some huge boosts in both traffic and conversions. I mean, I'm making a profit; the site pays for itself, both of them, but it's just not enough!
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  • Profile picture of the author xypoon
    As long as something relies on sales the more targeted the traffic is the better in my opinion.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dimitris Skiadas
    Let's say you have a website.And your competitor has another site, similar to yours.

    Your site might get 10.000 visitors per month and makes 100 sales.

    Your competitor's site gets 2000 visitors per month and makes 100 sales too.

    Your site's conversion is 1% and your competitors site has a conversion of 5 %.

    As you can see, improving your conversion rate is a big factor for all the websites.

    And i keep saying that to all of my customers who think that if they pay for PPC, they will make millions although their site needs a total reconstrustion!

    Cheers!

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    • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
      Originally Posted by Garage667 View Post


      And i keep saying that to all of my customers who think that if they pay for PPC, they will make millions although their site needs a total reconstrustion!

      Cheers!

      Dimitris
      EXACTLY! I am now embarking on cleaning up both of my sites, not to duplicate my top competitor (impressiveinscriptions dot com), but to kind of follow a somewhat similar format, although I think the way their ordering is set up, it rather complex too.

      But the site is cleaner. So I need an overhaul on mine too.

      I once had one of their customers call ME asking if their order had shipped yet!!!

      And the competitor who wanted to buy my keyword link to their site thought I was a content site, not a sales sight.

      So can I get some opinions here...

      1. Get rid of the right column
      2. Left Nav with bigger, bolder lettering - "maybe" buttons for Pricing Info, Shipping Info, FAQ
      3. At the top, say something about "how easy it is to order from us..."
      4. Move all of the excess verbiage from the main index page to the About Our Bookmarks page
      5. Have a 5x3 table set up on the front page for the different categories, with images plus Buy Now or Order Now and More Images links - this tells people that it's a SALES site but not limited to just those designs
      6. Move the video below the table

      Then follow the same format, more or less "converting" my 3-column to a 2-column without having to start from scratch on an entirely new design.

      Thoughts? Suggestions?

      Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author NACAdam
    hey I already said this in another post but the best site so you can track your copy is www.visualwebsiteoptimizer.com then you can also use a service called clicktale.com these sites will let you know what people are doing when they get to your site you can track test and tweek until you are making the most bang for your buck.
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  • Profile picture of the author clickgold
    Well, I don't know much about your site. I would advise though you make conversion your top priority. Even if you are getting 1000 people a day, if your set is not setup to make them do what you want, they will leave, and all that work will come to nought. Set this as a priority first, and then concentrate on driving more visitors, chhers
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    • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
      Originally Posted by clickgold View Post

      Well, I don't know much about your site. I would advise though you make conversion your top priority. Even if you are getting 1000 people a day, if your set is not setup to make them do what you want, they will leave, and all that work will come to nought. Set this as a priority first, and then concentrate on driving more visitors, chhers
      Very true. I just learned how to make my bookmarks photos with rounded corners so I think that's going to make a big difference too once the format is reworked. I figured if I make my bookmarks with rounded corners, the graphics should reflect that but they don't. They will soon though!
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      • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
        I just wanted to say another huge Thank You to everyone who gave me feedback on my site's layout, conversions, etc.

        I just completed a MAJOR OVERHAUL on the site and I'd like your opinions, please?

        I think this new design speaks "Hey, this is a site that SELLS something" rather than just "talks" about stuff.

        Every page, starting with the home page, has a quick to find order form and each page says "shop for" so people should know right away that it's a site where bookmarks are sold.

        I cleaned up the entire layout to allow more "white space" - eliminated the 3-column layout to give the site more room to easily spread out so it doesn't look so cluttered.

        Visitors can order right from the home page like they do on the memorial bookmarks site, which gets not even half the amount of traffic but more conversions, and I think that's because I have an order form right on the home page.

        Open to more feedback!! (Oh, and the site broke 200 uniques/day this week!!) Wedding Favor Bookmarks and Personalized Bookmarks for All Occasions
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        • I remember looking at your bookmarks site once before, and it does look cleaner now.

          But I have to be very, very frank here.

          The problem I have is simply this:

          I just don't like your bookmarks.

          They're very generic. To me they say "Little old lady." The graphics are stock photos. The mottos seem preachy. The font is a turn-off.

          Could you put the personalization on the other side so it doesn't impinge on the artwork?

          Amazon has a series of Dover bookmark books (Monet, Tiffany, Van Gogh...). For $1.50 you get 12 bookmarks and gorgeous art.

          It's possible your conversions are low because people like the idea of custom bookmarks but they're not crazy about your implementation.

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          • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
            Originally Posted by fluffythewondercat View Post

            I remember looking at your bookmarks site once before, and it does look cleaner now.

            But I have to be very, very frank here.

            The problem I have is simply this:

            I just don't like your bookmarks.

            They're very generic. To me they say "Little old lady." The graphics are stock photos. The mottos seem preachy. The font is a turn-off.

            Could you put the personalization on the other side so it doesn't impinge on the artwork?

            Amazon has a series of Dover bookmark books (Monet, Tiffany, Van Gogh...). For $1.50 you get 12 bookmarks and gorgeous art.

            It's possible your conversions are low because people like the idea of custom bookmarks but they're not crazy about your implementation.

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            Fortunately and thankfully, the likes and dislikes of the styles are very subjective. I've had young brides rave over many of the styles to where they didn't know which one they liked best! In fact, I have an order going out in the next couple of days to a band member and her fiance with the musical notes from the Black & White selections.

            Another young couple in Canada, in fact, twin sisters having a double wedding, just ordered TWO of the "generic, stock photo, old lady" designs for their wedding. What they found on my site they weren't able to find anywhere else.

            It's not only those specific "designs" that I'm selling. Maybe that's not clear on my site and something I have to work on. These are designs that anyone can customize; i.e., add their own sayings to, send me a photo and I'll embed it, print double sided, etc., which is why at the top of the page I say, "Or use the order form below and just say Custom! Tell us what you're looking for and we'll do the rest."

            No one HAS to order ONLY the designs that are shown. What I selected to put on the front page are those designs that several people have ordered already over the last three years - YOUNG people, newlyweds, not the grandmas. LOL

            I know you can get "cheap" bookmarks just about anywhere. I compete with iPrint every day. But what I need to ensure is that I'm getting across to people, and again, maybe I have to reword some things or something - I customize anything. You send it, I'll work with it until it's the way you want it.

            So pretend here, if you were looking for CUSTOM bookmarks; i.e., you have a design in mind and you want them for your wedding, baby shower, upcoming graduation, promo for your business - and you want to be able to TALK to someone about your design, what on my site would influence you to pick up the phone or look through some of the designs or send an email saying ... "this is what I'm looking for, this is what I want" ?

            That's what I need to know.

            Okay, so you don't like those designs and you'd head over to Amazon and buy them "off the rack." Then you're not looking for custom bookmarks. You're just looking for something for yourself to stick in a book. Cool! You're not a potential customer.

            Not everyone "needs" CUSTOM bookmarks. But for those that do ... weddings, showers, funerals, memorial services, graduations, birthdays, anniversaries, holidays, etc...

            Is my website projecting what I need it to project - CUSTOMIZATION at no additional charge.

            How else can I say it other than the way that it's already stated at the top? I have an About Us, Testimonials, etc. I don't know what else I can do actually.

            As for 'the font' - the font on which bookmarks? I use a couple of different fonts on the bookmarks and people have the option of choosing whatever font they want. So you don't like Lucinda Calligraphy or AucionLight (the two most requested fonts from former customers) or the Gothic font I use on some of the bookmarks. So. Pick out another font. Last month a customer emailed and asked if I had the "Papyrus" font. So I found an OpenSource Papyrus font and used that.

            These bookmarks are not sold "off the shelf" as they are. Think the sayings (not Mottos; brides don't put "mottos" on their bookmarks") are "preachy?" Put something else on there.

            FULL CUSTOMIZATION.

            My main focus here is how to get that across. If that's not getting across to anyone, then I need to come up with another way of doing it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Tadresources
    I took at look at your site. I think it's great, but it could use a little tweeking to make it more sales-ready. Also, I think the wedding industry is always a bit of feast or famine. I guess the key for you will be to get the "feast" portion of that up to perhaps 10 sales during a busy period so when they fall off you have something to work with. Good Luck!
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    • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
      Originally Posted by Tadresources View Post

      I took at look at your site. I think it's great, but it could use a little tweeking to make it more sales-ready. Also, I think the wedding industry is always a bit of feast or famine. I guess the key for you will be to get the "feast" portion of that up to perhaps 10 sales during a busy period so when they fall off you have something to work with. Good Luck!
      Yes, the wedding industry does trend high in the beginning of the year then tapers off. So I think since people have babies all year round and unfortunately people die all year round, I need to get sales boosted in those two areas to make up for the down times in the wedding segment.
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  • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
    Originally Posted by Ken_Caudill View Post

    Memorial bookmarks were sold for years by harvesting names from obituaries and sending one to each person mentioned as a survivor in the obit. An order form was enclosed so that each person could buy more.

    I don't see why it wouldn't work now.
    OH wow! You know, I would never even have thought of that! Thanks for that tip!

    I did a rush order for a family when the funeral home wasn't able to get them done in time.

    When I first launched the memorial division, I did some post card mailings to local funeral directors. No response. I'd be cutting in on their business because a lot of funeral homes already do that kind of stuff.

    But I never thought of doing what you're suggesting. Something I should look into!
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    • You're missing the point, Karen.

      I don't care for your bookmarks, but I'm not your target customer.

      Your target customers -- by definition -- are visiting the site but they're not buying. If you want to ignore the by-far-and-away most likely reason they're not buying -- which is that they don't like what they see -- fine. It's not like I'm looking to invest in the burgeoning bookmarks business. Not when books are making the transition to digital at a record rate.

      Honest to Pete, I think you'd have more luck selling little stick-on doodads people can use to personalize their Kindles.

      A couple of years ago at a trade show I met a guy who sells laser discs. Your business reminds me a lot of his.

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      • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
        Originally Posted by fluffythewondercat View Post

        You're missing the point, Karen.

        I don't care for your bookmarks, but I'm not your target customer.

        Your target customers -- by definition -- are visiting the site but they're not buying. If you want to ignore the by-far-and-away most likely reason they're not buying -- which is that they don't like what they see -- fine. It's not like I'm looking to invest in the burgeoning bookmarks business. Not when books are making the transition to digital at a record rate.

        Honest to Pete, I think you'd have more luck selling little stick-on doodads people can use to personalize their Kindles.

        A couple of years ago at a trade show I met a guy who sells laser discs. Your business reminds me a lot of his.

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        Respectfully, I don't think I'm missing the point. It's not just the designs. And I'm not offended that you don't like those specific designs. What the designs are like wasn't the main point (because I've received a ton of positive feedback on the "beautiful" designs from other sources, including wedding planners who wanted samples sent to show their bridal customers).

        I've had strangers just drop me an email saying how beautiful the designs were and if they needed bookmarks, they'd be buying them.

        The designs are literally subjective. And the designs on the main page aren't all of the designs. And the designs can be changed. You can print on the back side and leave the designs alone. That all falls under full customization.

        The MAIN point I believe was made earlier in the beginning of the thread - that visitors didn't know they could even buy something and the site wasn't conversion friendly in respect to not knowing how to order and the site being too cluttered and seeming more of an authority content site, not a product sales site.

        As for Kindles, the idea of printed and laminated bookmarks does not have to do with the sole concept of sticking them inside of a book. Since there are still 40,500 searches per month for "paperback books" and 18,000+ searches per month for "bookmarks to print," I think this can hardly be considered a "burgeoning" business. Obviously there are still a whole lot people out there that are still looking for physical books and physical bookmarks that can be printed and laminated.

        In fact, one of the highest selling wedding favors are the little bookmarker trinkets you can give to guests. I don't think they're going to tape them to a Kindle. To me selling little doodads to stick on Kindles would be more of a flash-in-the-pan idea than selling printed and laminated bookmarks.

        There are still brand new huge stores opening up today that are full of paperback books, floor to ceiling, wall to wall. I'm not the only one out there who doesn't even want a Kindle.

        But in any case, I guess I'll just have to see if the improvements I made make a difference in sales. If not, well, maybe I'll work harder on the memorial bookmarks instead and leave the primary site open for those that will buy. :rolleyes:
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  • Profile picture of the author rooze
    It seems like a good niche. With those traffic numbers it should be capable of yielding higher conversions.

    I'm a bit confused over some of the layout/design features - I'm not a fan of links opening new tabs on the same site, and there needs to be some consistency in how the products are presented from page to page. Opening images in a lightbox is a better and more professional option than showing them in a new tab. I can see how that would confuse people, they go from the home page to a category then click on an image. Now they have three browser tabs open. To get from the image back to the order page they need to X a tab, the back-button isn't an option.

    The site images load slow. That top banner text is a transparent PNG file at 146K. It needn't be a PNG, a JPG would be better. I'd also loose the text and go for a more conventional header which is more visually appealing, perhaps a collage of wedding / anniversary images that fit into the 'pink' theme. (or a collage of whatever categories sell best).

    I'd have a simple logo designed to give your site a name/identity. It isn't until I get to the footer that I see you are a legit business with a trading name. That's a no-no for an eCommerce website, you need to brand yourself with a name and logo.

    You need some people images. Weddings, anniversaries, people happy and smiling, then drop in a few testimonials around the images. Your site is flat with not enough personality.

    I'd have some testimonials knitted into my sales pages. That's the place to see happy smiling faces, not by having to click a button.

    There are better ways in which to integrate your PayPal payments form. Yours is simple enough but you could make the experience more in keeping with what people expect from a commerce site by adding a simple (free) shopping cart. That way people get to create an account with you and they can come back to check order status and get shipping/tracking info. Then just integrate PayPal on the order checkout page.

    If you have a US credit card you can also signup for Amazon payments. That gives people another payment option. Using a shopping cart they simply select their preferred option on the final checkout page Paypal or Amazon. With amazon, it can be integrated so people don't have to leave your website to pay.

    If you qualify for upgrading your PP account to a Web Payments Pro account then it functions like a merchant account with seamless checkout (the entire checkout process takes place on your website).

    On your articles and SEO work, be careful with some of that stuff as you may be sailing too close to the sun. A quick look at the first article Top Five Ways to Give Perfectly Memorable Anniversary Party Favors and you've got 16 reps of your 'party favors' 3.69KD and 45 reps of 'favors' at 5.05KD. It doesn't read naturally, it's obviously an SEO article.
    Are you using your articles effectively? I don't think so. Assuming that you're getting the article pages used as landing pages, they don't pull me into the rest of the site. Again, there's no personality, no warm fuzzy feeling, just static textual content. You need to pull people into your offer pages from the landing pages (articles).

    I don't think these are big issues, just basic design and visual things which if fixed could help a lot.
    I think you're on a precipice with some of your SEO work and you're not utilizing the landing pages to convert people to customers. You seem to provide comprehensive information on how to deal with you and what to expect, so that's good.
    Just my 2 penneth.
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    • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
      Originally Posted by rooze View Post

      It seems like a good niche. With those traffic numbers it should be capable of yielding higher conversions.

      I'm a bit confused over some of the layout/design features - I'm not a fan of links opening new tabs on the same site, and there needs to be some consistency in how the products are presented from page to page. Opening images in a lightbox is a better and more professional option than showing them in a new tab. I can see how that would confuse people, they go from the home page to a category then click on an image. Now they have three browser tabs open. To get from the image back to the order page they need to X a tab, the back-button isn't an option.
      GREAT observation. Thank you. I eliminated the "new window/tab" from the home page to the other pages. Now I have to learn how to do a lightbox because I really like that idea.

      Originally Posted by rooze View Post

      The site images load slow. That top banner text is a transparent PNG file at 146K. It needn't be a PNG, a JPG would be better. I'd also loose the text and go for a more conventional header which is more visually appealing, perhaps a collage of wedding / anniversary images that fit into the 'pink' theme. (or a collage of whatever categories sell best).
      I will look into that! The only reason it's currently a png is it needed to stay transparent against the background color. But I'll look into doing something with the header.

      Originally Posted by rooze View Post

      I'd have a simple logo designed to give your site a name/identity. It isn't until I get to the footer that I see you are a legit business with a trading name. That's a no-no for an eCommerce website, you need to brand yourself with a name and logo.
      Okay; I'll look into a way of adding a smaller version of my new logo (which is also my avatar in this forum and everywhere else) to the top header image. I'm still teaching myself Photoshop so I should be able to come up with something on that front.

      Originally Posted by rooze View Post

      You need some people images. Weddings, anniversaries, people happy and smiling, then drop in a few testimonials around the images. Your site is flat with not enough personality.

      I'd have some testimonials knitted into my sales pages. That's the place to see happy smiling faces, not by having to click a button.
      Never thought of that either.

      Originally Posted by rooze View Post

      There are better ways in which to integrate your PayPal payments form. Yours is simple enough but you could make the experience more in keeping with what people expect from a commerce site by adding a simple (free) shopping cart. That way people get to create an account with you and they can come back to check order status and get shipping/tracking info. Then just integrate PayPal on the order checkout page.
      I've thought of that but every time I tried to figure it out, I got completely lost. Any suggestions for what would be the simplest and easiest to implement free shopping cart tool, without needing to know all kinds of developer language? I know that would make a HUMONGOUS difference, if I could figure out how to work it.

      It needs to have all of the customization options that I currently have with the modified PayPal code that's in place now.

      Originally Posted by rooze View Post

      If you have a US credit card you can also signup for Amazon payments. That gives people another payment option. Using a shopping cart they simply select their preferred option on the final checkout page Paypal or Amazon. With amazon, it can be integrated so people don't have to leave your website to pay.

      If you qualify for upgrading your PP account to a Web Payments Pro account then it functions like a merchant account with seamless checkout (the entire checkout process takes place on your website).
      I didn't know that about Amazon payments! I will absolutely look into that option as well. By removing my "email only" type order form, I've taken away any visitor's ability to pay by cashier's check or money order. But I guess they can simply call or email if they want to ask about paying that way. I've only had three orders that paid offline.

      Originally Posted by rooze View Post

      On your articles and SEO work, be careful with some of that stuff as you may be sailing too close to the sun. A quick look at the first article Top Five Ways to Give Perfectly Memorable Anniversary Party Favors and you've got 16 reps of your 'party favors' 3.69KD and 45 reps of 'favors' at 5.05KD. It doesn't read naturally, it's obviously an SEO article.
      Good point! I guess that's a major oops there!!

      Originally Posted by rooze View Post

      Are you using your articles effectively? I don't think so. Assuming that you're getting the article pages used as landing pages, they don't pull me into the rest of the site. Again, there's no personality, no warm fuzzy feeling, just static textual content. You need to pull people into your offer pages from the landing pages (articles).
      Originally these articles were written mainly for backlinks to the site, not as landing pages specifically. But I guess I can lighten them up and use them to draw people into the site, although I'm not sure exactly how to do that with these types of articles. I was thinking of taking each of them and converting them to visual articles, PowerPoint slide shows, narrating the articles, adding more visuals to them by way of printing and taking photos of some completed bookmarks, and doing YouTube marketing with them. I haven't seen any of my competitors doing that yet.

      Originally Posted by rooze View Post

      I don't think these are big issues, just basic design and visual things which if fixed could help a lot.
      I think you're on a precipice with some of your SEO work and you're not utilizing the landing pages to convert people to customers. You seem to provide comprehensive information on how to deal with you and what to expect, so that's good.
      Just my 2 penneth.
      Thank you very much for such a insightful and comprehensive overview and for pointing out some very obvious flaws that I never saw! This is going to help me stay focused on getting this site up to where it needs to be!

      I told my husband that I completely believe that if I can get three orders totaling $600 in just three days, there is no reason why, with the right effort applied, that this business can't see double that.

      I'm not looking to "get rich and famous" with this business, but making enough revenue to pay the mortgage and regular bills would be awesome since we're struggling with our limited SSD not being able to cover it all.

      Thank you again VERY MUCH! Stay tuned for the improvements!!
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      • Profile picture of the author rooze
        Originally Posted by ksmusselman View Post

        Any suggestions for what would be the simplest and easiest to implement free shopping cart tool, without needing to know all kinds of developer language?
        I'm not up on free cart software, I know they're widely available so perhaps make a new post if you decide to go that route, and ask the WF

        Some hosting accounts come pre-installed with 'Fantastico', which includes one or more free cart programs.

        I've used Virtuemart extensively and it's free, but you need to install it on top of Joomla (which is also free). Joomla is included in Fantastico if you have that. Of course with VirtueMart, there are two add-ons which you need, one for PayPal and one for Amazon, and both cost around $50, so it isn't exactly free

        If you have some cash and you want an easy to config cart, try this X-Cart: Ecommerce storefront features It comes with Paypal, Amazon and also Google checkout. It's only $159 and would be a great investment.

        Like you said, if you can make $600 in 3 days there's no reason why you shouldn't be able to build on that. I think you're at the point where you need to speculate (invest) in order to accumulate.

        Good Luck

        Rooze
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        • Profile picture of the author ksmusselman
          Originally Posted by rooze View Post

          I'm not up on free cart software, I know they're widely available so perhaps make a new post if you decide to go that route, and ask the WF

          Some hosting accounts come pre-installed with 'Fantastico', which includes one or more free cart programs.

          I've used Virtuemart extensively and it's free, but you need to install it on top of Joomla (which is also free). Joomla is included in Fantastico if you have that. Of course with VirtueMart, there are two add-ons which you need, one for PayPal and one for Amazon, and both cost around $50, so it isn't exactly free

          If you have some cash and you want an easy to config cart, try this X-Cart: Ecommerce storefront features It comes with Paypal, Amazon and also Google checkout. It's only $159 and would be a great investment.

          Like you said, if you can make $600 in 3 days there's no reason why you shouldn't be able to build on that. I think you're at the point where you need to speculate (invest) in order to accumulate.

          Good Luck

          Rooze
          Thank you again Rooze!!

          I have my To Do list on my desktop and I just watched a tutorial to batch process my 149 images into thumbnails with Fireworks. I have another video loaded to add Lightbox 2 using Dreamweaver. Thanks to some college courses a couple years ago, I was able to get Adobe CS4 added to my tuition payments! LOL

          So far, I've made it so the pages don't open into new tabs/windows from the home page. Next up, getting the lightbox set up on the pages.

          Baby steps... as I start making a few more sales and we get some bills caught up, I'll have the cash to invest in a better shopping cart system.

          Being on SSD is a real pain the you-know-what; it's not like being able to have a full time decent paying job for the income while you build a business. That's one of the reasons why it's been tough. I took more than a 50% cut in pay when I lost my job, on the heels of my husband taking a 65% cut in pay when he went out on medical disability. So we've been muddling along doing what we can.

          It wasn't until recently I started spending a crapload of time on YouTube trying to learn how to do some stuff with images and creating some videos to get into video marketing.

          But I'm feeling a lot more positive about this site now that I've gotten some solid feedback and pointers on what to do with it.

          It'll get there!!!

          Thanks again - back to work! LOL
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