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A quick website critique

by LloydC
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Hey warriors,

I've been writing articles for a while and thought I'd try to reach out to a broader audience(going to be launching a WSO etc) So I've set up a website. Just give me a quick overview of what you think. I'm giving you permission to be as harsh as possible, so knock yourselves out pointing out errors.

DO NOT PURCHASE ANYTHING, I AM NOT FINISHED TESTING.

Here is the site:

http://lcarticles.com

Looking forward to hearing from you.
#critique #quick #website
  • Profile picture of the author Cataclysm1987
    Very generic. You should add much more graphics, content and possibly even video or bio about your company if you want anyone to buy.

    Also add some trust indicators like SSL logos and Paypal logos to show your payments are secure.
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    • Profile picture of the author busterkman
      Yeah, it does look pretty plain. Maybe some examples of what you are gonna get. Not the whole article, but a little snippet and then stop.
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  • Profile picture of the author ryanman
    I'd say make the content a bit more interesting. There are plenty of websites around the web who use a very professional tone. Try to make it stand out a bit and you will get more clients.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kange
    yes id definitely say put your personality across in the page so its not just a robotic piece about the service your offering
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Get a benefit-oriented headline up there. Something that will set you apart from all the other article services out there. You also need an "About" page where people can read about your qualifications.
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