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What Would You Do ?

by NewbieAff
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Help ! How would you increase conversions on this site, Geographical Tongue
  • Profile picture of the author ryanman
    The copy seems a bit weak. It would be best to go to amazon and check out some of the 5 star reviews people leave to similar products in your niche. You'll get some idea on what works and what doesn't.
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    • Profile picture of the author NewbieAff
      What do you mean by copy?
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      • Profile picture of the author ryanman
        Originally Posted by NewbieAff View Post

        What do you mean by copy?
        By that I mean copywriting or your pitch...
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  • Profile picture of the author Noel Cunningham
    Make the text easier on the eye - make it bigger, bold some words for emphasis, add some nice looking bullet points...

    Centre the image and make it bigger.

    There's a lot of info on that page but visually it's not doing anything for me. If you clean it up a bit it will make the reader want to read-on and therefore your CTR should gradually improve. Good luck with it - Noel.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ashley C
    A more readable font, and better design practice in general... on top of that, you may want to hire a writer to improve the copy. The site does feel a little messy, particularly on the product sales page.
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