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Which of these Videos is Best?

by GoogleWarrior
7 replies
Hi.
I am trying to figure out which video
is the best for my sales page.

Any advice or suggestions would be
greatly appreciated.

Video 1 Email #1 -ESL CLASSROOM GAMES | ESL CLASSROOM GAMES
Video 2 Email #2 – SKELETONS | ESL CLASSROOM GAMES
Video 3 Email #3 – ESL CLASSROOM GAMES – Change Your Life! | ESL CLASSROOM GAMES
Video 4 Email #4 -ESL CLASSROOM GAMES – Overseas | ESL CLASSROOM GAMES
#videos
  • Profile picture of the author ronaldlee
    I think video 2 is the best for your sales page.
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  • Profile picture of the author Holmstrom
    Hi GoogleWarrior,
    3 is definitely the best. Its "sociable" and that is name of the game nowadays
    and will be also in a future. If you use your description on a video put your whole
    name on it, its create more credibility.
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  • Profile picture of the author chinadigipro
    I've checked out all the mails....All are fun loving games..Takes me back to the school days of mine where i played all games like these.. First mail is basic - meaning everybody does that. Jumbled words in mail 2 , change the seat game in mail 3 and Taboo in mail 4 all are interesting.. If i have to choose the best, it will be mail 2 because it deals with vocabulary. Once they are thorough with vocabulary, they can proceed with fun in other games..
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    • Profile picture of the author Marty S
      The best part of your sales page is the back story and the Images of you with happy groups of kids... That's touching. However the first picture you have below the video is a busty babe holding a sign. Furthermore, all of your video samples are just AE movie trailer type intros full of overkill, and seriously lacking any honesty or human connection.

      Ditch the AE trailers, and ditch the babe. You need to be in these videos telling people about your experiences, what you have to offer and most importantly, showing your obvious passion for this field.

      As it is, there is a major disconnect between what you are presenting in these videos and what is obviously something you are very committed to. You need to get out front in these videos, and show me some of that passion for what you are offering.
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    I agree with the post above. I didn't like any of the videos because they did nothing to help with the actual selling of your product. I could watch all of those videos and still have absolutely no idea what it is your product does - that is not good selling.

    There is no point having a video just for the sake of having a video. These movie trailer type videos offer no real value to the page so I would ditch them completely. If you do want to use a video then get a proper sales video done that talks about the product.
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  • Profile picture of the author GoogleWarrior
    Ok. Thanks guys. I will think about what you all had to say tonight...and possibly start to work on a few changes.
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  • Profile picture of the author bchez
    So, hopefully you have already decided to ditch the vids for sure

    #1 Becoming is misspelled. And the vid seems very sinister in general. Why is this ball going to crush me? Because I want to teach ESL?

    #2 Looks like CSI or Medical Drama show credits, and I don't know what the list of game names means, or has to do with the xrays?

    #3 Seems like these vids could be sincere ESL teachers, but the words mean nothing, and worse are something that would do harm to your product and brand.... "from the birth everything's is already inside you" I would NEVER want to use a product that is supposed to help kids learn English from a company that put that out there! O_O If you REALLY want to keep one of these exact vids, I would keep this tempate, but make the words mean something. Use them to explain what your product is and how these teachers used it to be more successful.

    #4 I dont even know what the point of this video is.

    I think you may have decided you wanted a video without figuring out the purpose of it. A video works well if it explains a product or is testimonial in nature - none of your vids have either of these qualities.

    And you should send Marty a check for his advice! The babe? At first, I was confused looking at your site. It is ESL games for mail order brides? Teach your future wife to speak English through my site? If that is the aim, you are spot on my friend.

    Everything else on your site is great (well, except maybe the "proof screens", I don't think anyone outside of IM cares about that) focus on what is going to ADD to that story you have built, and what will harm it.

    Best of luck!
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