Please review my TV Commercial

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Hey Guys,
I trust your opinions and wanted to show everyone the new commercial we produced for our website. This is the rough cut version that hasn't been re-dubbed or color corrected so please don't judge it by that. I hope its not too racy for prime time. Let me know your thoughts. Thanks
Robert

https://vimeo.com/39908337 Password: bigguns
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  • Profile picture of the author Qamar
    Was that Cindy Crawford with the facial mask? Btw, I think the TV ad is nice and entertaining.



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    • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
      Originally Posted by Qamar View Post

      Was that Cindy Crawford with the facial mask? Btw, I think the TV ad is nice and entertaining.



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      Thanks for the feedback... No, not Cindy Crawford unfortunately lol
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      • Profile picture of the author cashp0wer
        I just viewed your TV commercial (that does look like Cindy Crawford) and I thought it was very nice and I enjoyed it.
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        • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
          Originally Posted by cashp0wer View Post

          I just viewed your TV commercial (that does look like Cindy Crawford) and I thought it was very nice and I enjoyed it.
          Thanks for the feedback... Hopefully it turns into lots of visitors lol
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  • Hi Robert, I can say "WOW!" because your tv ad hit just who is watching, and it will be easy to remember your website.
    It's done with a good taste, within a normal customer's house, and it was a great idea.
    Well assembled, it will send you a lot of visitors, I'm sure!

    See you soon,
    Alessandro Zamboni
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Skelly
    From someone who used to make TV commercials professionally I give yours a thumbs up? However I'm sorry to say most commercials online don't translate into visitors or dollars. And most of the ones on TV for websites rarely bring an ROI. Time and money would be better spent building a blog network focused on your niche keywords.
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    • Profile picture of the author Daniel Evans
      Originally Posted by Andrew Skelly View Post

      From someone who used to make TV commercials professionally I give yours a thumbs up? However I'm sorry to say most commercials online don't translate into visitors or dollars. And most of the ones on TV for websites rarely bring an ROI. Time and money would be better spent building a blog network focused on your niche keywords.
      What statistics did you obtain to draw that hypothesis?

      TV advertising can bring a significant ROI hence why companies do it. It's how programmes are funded. Companies aren't just taking punts. Many have been advertising on TV effectively for decades.

      If you aren't seeing a good ROI, either your advert is bad or your product / service is bad - or both.
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  • Profile picture of the author TonyBabb
    Great commercial. I can really see that working well for you.
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  • Profile picture of the author Michael Franklin
    Hi Robert!

    Very good ad...Cute and clever! Out of curiosity, how long did it take for you to film that commerical? I hear that even with short commericals, so much ends up on the cutting room floor.
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    • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
      Originally Posted by Michael Franklin View Post

      Hi Robert!

      Very good ad...Cute and clever! Out of curiosity, how long did it take for you to film that commerical? I hear that even with short commericals, so much ends up on the cutting room floor.
      The commercial took about 8 hours to shoot, we have several different versions we are playing with to see what works best.
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  • Profile picture of the author powerofschool
    Hi robert ,

    The ad was really good.

    Good commercial tv ad.
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  • Profile picture of the author Haris Tahic
    Wow, nice..
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    Interesting. This follows the exact theme of a commercial
    for entertainment.com on the last The Celebrity Apprentice

    That team won so hopefully yours will as well.

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  • Profile picture of the author Cataclysm1987
    Lol!

    Not entirely original but it made me laugh, therefore I'm open to your marketing. Nice work.
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  • Profile picture of the author Charlotte Jay
    Clever lol I like it
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    • Profile picture of the author Bill Farnham
      Fwiw, I listened to the video about 5 times and still have no idea what the woman says after she slaps the guy. That could just be me, but I generally don't have a problem understanding commercials.

      Outside of that issue I like it.

      ~Bill
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  • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
    Yeah, we still have to re-dub the audio so hopefully it comes out clearer on the final version. Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author ivan84m
    LOL. I like the humorous context. Congrats, Robert.
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    • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
      Originally Posted by ivan84m View Post

      LOL. I like the humorous context. Congrats, Robert.
      Thanks, Hopefully everyone else likes it, we plan on doing a full series of these with different couples and situations all centered around the "I gotta Tap That" line.
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  • Profile picture of the author IMHunter
    It was great. I liked it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ashley Gable
    I liked it too. It did feel like the Celebrity Apprentice ad. Yours though, didnt feel as corny and cheesy, so well done.

    Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mike Hill
    Oooh I'd tap that... LOL. That will get attention!
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    • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
      Originally Posted by Mike Hill View Post

      Oooh I'd tap that... LOL. That will get attention!

      Yeah, we plan on using that tag line a lot lol
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  • Profile picture of the author Tarik93
    haha nice concept, I enjoyed it
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  • Profile picture of the author Fun to Write
    I like it. This ad combines a humorous situation with a play on words that involves your brand name. I gotta tap that is a great slogan.

    The only thing that bugged me is the sound wasn't clear enough to hear everything the guy said.
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Evans
    Originally Posted by thomarv29 View Post

    Hey Guys,
    I trust your opinions and wanted to show everyone the new commercial we produced for our website. This is the rough cut version that hasn't been re-dubbed or color corrected so please don't judge it by that. I hope its not too racy for prime time. Let me know your thoughts. Thanks
    Robert

    https://vimeo.com/39908337 Password: bigguns
    I thought that was awesome!

    I was pleasantly suprised.
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    • Profile picture of the author dmister
      I just watched it too and I have to say that it is a really good advert and you also have a good slogan. As others have said the audio could be improved a little as it was hard to hear the woman speak. However, overall it was good and I would check out your website if I had watched it!
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      • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
        Originally Posted by dmister View Post

        I just watched it too and I have to say that it is a really good advert and you also have a good slogan. As others have said the audio could be improved a little as it was hard to hear the woman speak. However, overall it was good and I would check out your website if I had watched it!
        Thanks for the feedback... the audio hasnt been re-dubbed will be soon so it will be much clearer.
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  • Profile picture of the author ITMNOW
    That's good! I had never heard of Tappocity
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    • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
      Originally Posted by ITMNOW View Post

      That's good! I had never heard of Tappocity
      It hasnt been officially launched yet but will be in the next few days. Thanks for the feedback!
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  • Profile picture of the author akmal
    It is fun. Good luck for your launch later.
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  • Profile picture of the author Tadresources
    Great commercial, and that does look like Cindy Crawford, lol!
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    • Profile picture of the author philhunter
      Its good, if you don't mind me asking is this the first time you have advertised on TV? What sort of ROI do you expect to get?
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  • Profile picture of the author Jay Wessman
    Hahaha I like! Really funny and entertaining
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    • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
      Originally Posted by Jay Wessman View Post

      Hahaha I like! Really funny and entertaining
      Thanks for the feedback... we have actually launched the site now so its live but still needs some bugs worked out.
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  • Profile picture of the author StevenJones
    Nice commercial, though some people might find it a bit vulgar, but these people don't have a sense of humor after all. Then again, humor doesn't always sell, but according to the warriors who've watched I think you did a good job.
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  • Profile picture of the author Eduard Stinga
    Here's my opinion as a Film student: I like it overall, it's nice, catchy, funny - the only thing that I don't like is the last 2 shots; there's a medium shot/close-up of the guy at the laptop then you cut directly into a close-up of the girl at the laptop as well, it just doesn't seem to flow (at least for me)
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    • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
      Originally Posted by Eduard Stinga View Post

      Here's my opinion as a Film student: I like it overall, it's nice, catchy, funny - the only thing that I don't like is the last 2 shots; there's a medium shot/close-up of the guy at the laptop then you cut directly into a close-up of the girl at the laptop as well, it just doesn't seem to flow (at least for me)
      We have a few different cuts of the commercial so the other ones are probably a little more congruent.
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  • Profile picture of the author GodMode52
    Well done, i like the idea
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