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Hey guys,

I have recently gone the clickbank route and bought a better website. I have been following this free ebook I got from the WSO section about clickbank and how to make money with clickbank. I will say this is a test run for me with clickbank, I know its competitive because everybody can join and promote. But I recently followed this method and I wrote two articles. One has a score of 94% with a keyword density of 3( I believe can't remember ) and the other a score of 93% with a keyword density of 3( for sure wrote article today ). One article is about 400 words and the other is about or over 500 words. I really want to make this thing happen so I am not going to stop at all. I will finish this website! So I just wanted to let yall know I'm not trying to sell anything to you, I just want to know if you love the website. For the plugin I used a free plugin called bloggerhigh SEO.

Love,
Flatbro94

P.S. I finally bought a REAL website its .net ( should be good for SEO purposes )
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  • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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    I'd say the design is not bad. Simple and doesn't take away from what you are trying to accomplish with the site. The content though is very...awkward.

    The wording is definitely off (i.e. "Another good thing feature", "Have you ever seen the world scenery in this flight pro sim lately"). It was a chore to read through it and understand what you were saying. Definitely looks like you did as much as you could to stretch the word count. The fact that you wrote from a personal point of view will probably be a good thing for that product though.
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    • Profile picture of the author Zack Sprague
      Originally Posted by Joe Robinson View Post

      I'd say the design is not bad. Simple and doesn't take away from what you are trying to accomplish with the site. The content though is very...awkward.

      The wording is definitely off (i.e. "Another good thing feature", "Have you ever seen the world scenery in this flight pro sim lately"). It was a chore to read through it and understand what you were saying. Definitely looks like you did as much as you could to stretch the word count. The fact that you wrote from a personal point of view will probably be a good thing for that product though.
      Any advice for improvement?
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  • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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    For your "Features of the Program" article:

    Go in depth when discussing the features of the game. If you haven't bought it and don't really know what to talk about, then you need to. The descriptions you provide are too vague and are probably why it seems like you were fishing for word count.

    For your "Is it Better Than a Competing Product" article:

    Once again, go more in depth. The easiest way to do this would be to actually research and compare other flight simulators that are on the market. Just rattling off what the product sales page says isn't enough for a comparison article.

    For both articles:

    I'd recommend having someone who can proofread and edit your articles, if you don't want to outsource the writing altogether. Your content is going to be the only way that you get your reader/customer to take the action that you want them to take. Your content needs to be top of the line.
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  • Profile picture of the author Zack Sprague
    Hmm How much will it cost me to outsource it? I also need to write a presell.
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  • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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    Depends. The market goes as low as $0.60 per 100 words. You get what you pay for in most cases though, so if you want the best expect to pay a healthy sum. It's worth it though if you get the ROI that a great piece of content can provide.
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    • Profile picture of the author Zack Sprague
      Originally Posted by Joe Robinson View Post

      Depends. The market goes as low as $0.60 per 100 words. You get what you pay for in most cases though, so if you want the best expect to pay a healthy sum. It's worth it though if you get the ROI that a great piece of content can provide.
      Do you think my english teacher would write the aricles If I paid him? Haha, no offense to me I really hate writing articles. I suck at them!
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      • Profile picture of the author fin
        Maybe you should try and find a girlfriend who can write them.

        You can be the brains behind the operation and tell here what to write, lol.
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        • Profile picture of the author Zack Sprague
          Originally Posted by fin View Post

          Maybe you should try and find a girlfriend who can write them.

          You can be the brains behind the operation and tell here what to write, lol.
          I second on this haha!
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