me, myself, my squeeze page

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  • Profile picture of the author Andrey Doichev
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  • Profile picture of the author Randall Magwood
    Remove the Clickbank ID, Password, and rename the "Pick a Username" field to "Name".

    Where's the headline on your squeeze page?
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    • Profile picture of the author retsced
      Where's the benefit for me? Why do I have to watch a video to find out what I'm getting out of it? As the op said above, where's the headline? Where's the instant connection with the visitor? I have no idea why I would need a clickbank id.

      The thing is, you have created a stylish landing page that could probably win the miss squeeze page pageant, but your message lacks direction. I feel like I have to work to get what you are offering...I'm gone.

      BTW, best of luck with everything, hope you find success on your journey.
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      • Profile picture of the author Tadresources
        Originally Posted by retsced View Post

        Where's the benefit for me? Why do I have to watch a video to find out what I'm getting out of it? As the op said above, where's the headline? Where's the instant connection with the visitor? I have no idea why I would need a clickbank id.

        The thing is, you have created a stylish landing page that could probably win the miss squeeze page pageant, but your message lacks direction. I feel like I have to work to get what you are offering...I'm gone.

        BTW, best of luck with everything, hope you find success on your journey.
        I had the same impression. Lovely squeeze page, but what exactly am i looking at?
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  • Profile picture of the author AussieIan
    Couldn't agree more with the above comments.

    You MUST have a big bold headline to grab peoples attention. Remember WIIFM (whats in it for me) Allways try to think how someone landing on your site is thinking - Why should I optin -whats in it for me???

    Make the squeeze page as simple as possible - name and email only. The rest can come latter. The biggest think is to get a big attention grabbing headline ASAP and simplify the page. I think your optin % will improve quite a bit after making these changes.
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  • Profile picture of the author seoproservices
    Sorry... But I think you can do it more appealing
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