Please review my video... need some honest opionions

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So i have put together a video presentation that i will be spending $20,000 online to promote... before i do that however, i would like to get the feedback of people who actually sell real products online and see if they would use the site to sell their products. If you leave me honest feedback i would greatly appreciate it. Thanks
Robert

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  • Profile picture of the author Bill Farnham
    Yea, I'd tapp that...

    Looks professional, good graphics and audio.

    ~Bill
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  • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
    Thanks Bill, we are planning on launching early next month!
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  • Profile picture of the author mmrumii
    Your video is obviously looks like professional and different type of graphics and
    basically audio quality is clear.
    Go on and I am hopefully for that.
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  • Profile picture of the author antac
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    I wish your video will be most profitable.
    I have seen it few minutes ago and it's beautiful.
    Best wishes for you.
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  • Profile picture of the author n8
    thomarv29,

    Honestly..... this is an excellent video. I can tell you've put a lot of work into this business. Your website has a great feel too. I actually signed up a couple weeks ago Didn't realize it wasn't "live" yet.

    Keep on doing what your doing!

    best regards
    -Nate
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    • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
      Originally Posted by n8 View Post

      thomarv29,

      Honestly..... this is an excellent video. I can tell you've put a lot of work into this business. Your website has a great feel too. I actually signed up a couple weeks ago Didn't realize it wasn't "live" yet.

      Keep on doing what your doing!

      best regards
      -Nate

      Hey Nate,
      That means a lot to me, we have put a lot of time and effort into the business and are hopefully making the best decisions to help us grow it into something great. We will have a booth at Internet Retailer Conference in Chicago in June so hopefully that gets lots of Merchant participating. Any feedback would be great. Thanks
      Robert

      P.S on the Merchant side of it we have 9 videos, if you have time to check them out please do so. Thanks
      Robert
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  • Profile picture of the author CodeBotics
    That is a brilliant video! I love this style of video, it kind of resembles Google's video style which I like too. Good quality, easy to understand audio and neat graphics. Very professional!
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  • Profile picture of the author AZMD
    Good video thomarv29.

    Simple, to the point and professional looking. I think it'll get interest and clicks. I wish you a world of success with your project.
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  • Profile picture of the author Hackbridge
    The video is professional looking. I don't like the two tone colour of the video graphics (green & grey) if I'm honest. I like a bit of colour myself, and I think that additional colour would be more appealing. Perhaps you can split test that? Nothing wrong with the animated graphics at all.

    How do you spell "Analytics" though?..



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    logic - the branch of philosophy that analyzes inference
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    Somehow I would like the video to be more appealing. Apart from the costs which are 34% cheaper than Ebay, I think merchants want to know how attractive to buyers Tappocity is? Could it be more attractive than Ebay or Amazon?

    Hope this helps some. I try to be objective, and I hope I'm not putting down the video which is very good albeit I think that "analitics" is spelt wrong and should be "analytics".

    All the best

    Brian
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    • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
      Originally Posted by Hackbridge View Post

      The video is professional looking. I don't like the two tone colour of the video graphics (green & grey) if I'm honest. I like a bit of colour myself, and I think that additional colour would be more appealing. Perhaps you can split test that? Nothing wrong with the animated graphics at all.

      How do you spell "Analytics" though?..





      Somehow I would like the video to be more appealing. Apart from the costs which are 34% cheaper than Ebay, I think merchants want to know how attractive to buyers Tappocity is? Could it be more attractive than Ebay or Amazon?

      Hope this helps some. I try to be objective, and I hope I'm not putting down the video which is very good albeit I think that "analitics" is spelt wrong and should be "analytics".

      All the best

      Brian
      Hey Brian,
      Thanks for catching the spelling error, i will have to have our video guy make that change asap... great catch, the other input is also great, i really appreciate the time you took to do a careful review. If you ever need to sell any products ill give you $300 in your account without having to put any other money into it just for going above and beyond. Thanks
      Robert

      just email me here -
      tappocity@gmail.com
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  • Profile picture of the author Tim Franklin
    I like the video it moves smoothly, it verbally relates the message but,

    (you know there is always a butt somewhere)

    There is something missing, both in terms of visual modality, (pause for effect)

    And the psychology of the presentation, I noticed a number of things that might help, I saw four or five different things that I think may help the video communicate better.

    Its certifiably a great spot, but is it a 20 grand spot, perhaps not yet, but the elements are very close, I can send you a PM with a video follow up, on a few things that may help some, (I may not be able to get that done until in the morning)

    The music is great, by the way, perhaps a couple of Foley clips, would spice it up a bit, nice voice over too, just the right tone,
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  • Profile picture of the author AtomicBudgie
    Great video. I'll join send me the details. Thanks.
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    • Profile picture of the author thomarv29
      Originally Posted by AtomicBudgie View Post

      Great video. I'll join send me the details. Thanks.
      http://www.tappocity.com/MerchantHome.aspx
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