Lately, I have been wondering if my writing sucks. I can get work at .01 cent a word but when I up the rate to .02 - .03 a word, I get no bites. This has made me look at my writing and determine what I could be doing to improve my writing. I write mainly for my own websites but sometimes, I like to write for others just to have an extra income source. Could someone take a look at this writing sample and tell me what you think. I can take good criticism so don't hold back. http://i1108.photobucket.com/albums/...tingSample.jpg
(Sorry the words are so tiny. Had to make it as an image since this was written for someone else.)
*That isn't all of the article but it should be enough content to judge.