after two months it can launch

Hi Owen

Just a few points:

- You have several typos on your page (e.g. "threw" for through, portfollio etc.). Might be worth getting it proof-read.

- IMO you need to show an example of the site you are offering.

- US readers may not know what a fortnight is.



Frank

Hi Owen,

Also learn the difference between their, there, and they're.

For example: "eBooks for Gamekeepers looking to get there name back out there. Ive taken out the leg work Click HERE"

It should read : eBooks for Gamekeepers looking to get their name back out there. I've taken out the leg work Click HERE

A bulleted list is much easier to read when it goes down in a lined up list:

-item 1
-item 2
-item 3
-item 4


Type will be much easier to read if you justify left rather than center. The eye has trouble following centered type in a paragraph. You left justified in the "6 hour" site in the area next to your photo.

Just some thoughts that came to mind when I looked at the site.

woooooo guys thats not the one sorry
its this one
6 Hour Website
the other is under construction at the moment

thanks don ill check it out

Owen, your P.S. might be better placed aligned to the left so it's easier to read.

brilliant help guys im on these faults al ready

ok everyone alot changed could you take anouther look and let me know thanks everyone

kool thanks for that

First tip, fire your proof reader.
Second, your headline in the orange box "Attention All Newcomes To Web Design." Center that box in the middle of the page and get rid of the period at the end
Third, the box where you introduce yourself, center that box, it is currently aligned to the left.
Fourth, The text "Sign up here" center it on the page.
Fifth, "Free Gift Number 1 My EBook" change EBook to eBook
Sixth, EXPEDITE NEWSLETTER, that box, center it on the page. The text within it is centered and so should the box as well.
Seventh, (Required fields are bold) Center it like you ddid with the 2 lines above it.
Eight, Why Should You Sign Up?, the yellow box, center it, same reason as sixth above

I did not go over spelling or grammer, just cosmetics, it will look better and flow better. Someone who is telling me about design should have their site layout done well and currently you have text that is centered within boxes that are aligned left. It's confusing to newbies and for those who are more experienced can sense something is wrong with the product if the site selling it has design problems.

thanks sleak take a look now if you get the chance and see what you think thanks again to all for your help

when you set things to align center, you are saying everything enclosed in that tag - not the tag itself. that's probably why your bullets are all centered, while the div's themselves are still left aligned.

since you seem to be using tables to align your div tags, if you set the enclosing <td> tags to center, your div that's inside the td tag will be centered.

I was going to go through the html and fiix it for you, but man - it's a bit of a mess and much more complicated then it needs to be. I understand it is probably generated with a wysiwyg tool, but it looks like there has been so much editing that the tool really has created a bit of mess.

here's an example of what I am talking about:

<big><big><big><span style="color: red;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: red;">

-that's what get's introduced from repeated editing with a visual tool.. after a while, it gets harder and harder to get things the way you want them..