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Please Evaluate My First Ebook

by red dog
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Hello warriors I have created my first ebook on list building. it took me all day yesterday but I finally got it done I want to see if this ebook is worthy to give away as free report to build my list.If you can give me your honest opinion of what I am missing or left anything out I would like to know. If you think it is crap or good. I will definitely be grateful for the advice.

netincomeformula.info/hot-list-building-secrets.pdf



Thanks!

Red dog
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  • Profile picture of the author jamesrich1
    I'll check it out when I have the chance...
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    • Profile picture of the author red dog
      Ok thank you jamesrich1
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      • Profile picture of the author Tina Golden
        You really aren't supposed to do this here on the main forum, but since you posted it, I went ahead and read it.

        The first thing you should be doing is hiring an editor to go through this, or do a much better job proofing. There are a lot of errors. While this doesn't make the content any less accurate, it will give many readers a negative impression.

        This is blunt but I get the distinct impression that you have no real experience with building a list. The information is very basic and can be learned very quickly just reading this forum. Unless you are marketing to complete and utter newbies, this isn't going to be very valuable to anyone who signs up.

        Sorry if this sounds harsh but you did ask for honest opinions.
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        • Profile picture of the author glowworm
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          Originally Posted by Tina Golden View Post

          You really aren't supposed to do this here on the main forum, but since you posted it, I went ahead and read it.

          The first thing you should be doing is hiring an editor to go through this, or do a much better job proofing. There are a lot of errors. While this doesn't make the content any less accurate, it will give many readers a negative impression.

          This is blunt but I get the distinct impression that you have no real experience with building a list. The information is very basic and can be learned very quickly just reading this forum. Unless you are marketing to complete and utter newbies, this isn't going to be very valuable to anyone who signs up.

          Sorry if this sounds harsh but you did ask for honest opinions.

          Have to second this all the way.
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  • Profile picture of the author jamesrich1
    Red Dog for a brand new marketer this would be a good intro e-book to marketing online. I agree with your info in that book. One thing that I see left out of most marketing e-books is the importance of knowing what your customers worth is. Do you know what each click to your page is worth? (EPC) What each customers value is worth? If you do then you will not know how much you can spend on paid advertising to make money. If you do not then you are part of the 99% marketers swinging in the dark. (Just a side rant but very important questions)
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  • Profile picture of the author red dog
    Thank you all for your honesty you have helped me greatly with this I will have to work harder and improve my I M skills. No offense taken on the comments that is what I wanted to know thank you guys so very much!
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  • Profile picture of the author prem khaira
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    Not bad at all for this being your very first ebook...NOT BAD AT ALL!

    There's definitely some error...Not a HUGE Deal.

    The image, i cant read what it says there...Again not A HUGE deal but fixing all this
    will make your ebook look more professional.

    If you need a Free Ecover Creator Software - Let me know....
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    • Profile picture of the author red dog
      Hi prem khaira thank you for taking your time to check this out for me and thanks for your advice cheers!
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      • Profile picture of the author prem khaira
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        Originally Posted by red dog View Post

        Hi prem khaira thank you for taking your time to check this out for me and thanks for your advice cheers!
        Anytime

        Cheers!
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  • Profile picture of the author jbsmith
    Have you built a list?

    We are at a point in IM where there is so much competition, the way to stand out is to try things, improve them and THEN share your findings -- that's what is valuable to your consumer.

    So, that said...the structure you should use for something like this is...

    1. Why list building is still relevant and why skeptics should still use it (with proof - if you can't provide the proof, get some people who can to give you a few case studies)

    2. The overview system for list building - a) Pick a niche b) Know your ultimate monetization goal, c) develop your incentive e) setting up different landing pages (squeeze, opt-in on blog, pop-ups, etc...) f) generate traffic g) building loyalty with your list h) techniques for conversion of subs to customers

    Your report should cover each of these, perhaps at a high level where you move them toward paid products, but without this it is incomplete

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  • Profile picture of the author Stripe
    First, a sincere congratulations on you first ebook. That is a MAJOR milestone for most anyone. Some people will work at IM fro years and never do as much. Go figure.

    You have some good info in it, but if I were going to give you an honest and friendly critique, it would be that it looks like you chose a larger font to make the book take up more pages. If I were buying an ebook an got that idea, I might feel slighted somewhat.

    Anyway, I don't want to be critical of your work, but that is the first thing that came into my mind when I looked it over.

    Keep it up and you will do just fine in the long run.

    All the best!
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    • Profile picture of the author red dog
      Thanks Stripe!
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  • Profile picture of the author miracleken
    I like your ebook - precise and concise.
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  • Profile picture of the author madhushan
    Hi Red-dog,

    I just read through your ebook, and found lot of errors in it. If you are planning to give it to your list, I recommend you proof-read and edit the contents to perfection. You can go to fiverr and ask someone to edit the contents.
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