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I'm Sure Someone Can Direct Me.

by JWalsh32
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Hey Warriors,

I just completed my first article on "Positive Thinking" and when I say my first article it's because I haven't written a article in about 5 years. I just want some people to take a look at it and give me all the criticism they can give me so I can see how I look fair up to the other writers out there.

I don't know if this is the right section of the forum where I should be posting this, but i'm sure someone will mention it to me. If anyone has the heart to take a quick look threw my article and give me some remarks on it. I could take what ever you shoot my way so don't worry about hurting my feelings. I learn from my mistakes.

Just leave me your e-mail and I'll send it to you in a microsoft file.

Thank you,
Jeremy

**I was just thinking that this would be best suited for the Mind Warriors section of the forums and to just post it up there and ask for remarks. I don't know if this thread could be deleted or If I could just move it?
#direct
  • Profile picture of the author jamesrich1
    JWalsh32 yeah just put it up on the self improvement part of this forum and you will get some feedback. Just make sure your headline draws attention so you can get more views. Give the biggest benefit the readers will get from reading your article.
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