Which title(s) would you click on?

by Essence

Posted: 15 years ago 11 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

Without knowing anything about the product, just tell me at a glance which of these would get your 'click'.

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CmdrStidd 15 years ago

I would have to say that I would click on the 40 hours--6 weeks--$0.00-->

I forget how the rest of it goes but I think you get the idea of which link I am talking about.
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valerieSONORA 15 years ago

Huh? Does that mean you work 40 hours for 6 weeks and make $0?
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- Jared Alberghini 15 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by valerieSONORA
  
  Huh? Does that mean you work 40 hours for 6 weeks and make $0?
  
  That's what I was thinking Val, I wouldn't click on that title...
  
  The second title link was pretty bland...
  
  The third however, ( The Single Most Important Health-Related Document You May Ever Read. ) incorporated some interesting marketing techniques behind it... "The Most Important"... that could gain some interest in "clicks".
  
  .jrd
  
  Edit - Oh boy, it looks like the OP added a poll with a ton of different titles... and after looking at all of them, none really grabbed my attention. I would stick to the third link in your initial sig, about "The Most Important" stuff...
  
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Essence 15 years ago

Heh -- sorry, it took me a while to set up the poll options. I didn't realize the thread would be active without the poll attached. The OP should make more sense now.

(And no, Valerie, it means you invest $0 + 40 hours of time over 6 weeks and end up with passive income for life. )
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shorwood 15 years ago

I definitely would not click on any of those titles. None of them grabbed my attention even the slightest. They were either boring, or they seem like those products that promise to make you a million dollars overnight with only 4 minutes of work or something like that.

So personally, if I saw any of those titles, I just would have left without clicking.

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Brett Kruger 15 years ago

Hi Essence.

Like Shawn, I would be unlikely to click on any of those.

They are all a bit hypey for my liking.

Sorry.

Brett.
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- affilcrazy 15 years ago
  
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  Same as some of the others above. I wouldn't click any...they are far too salesy and what we have all seen too many times before!
  
  It looks like you are aiming at the newbie, who has probably made a few purchases already, but is struggling to get going...so the titles you have made are pretty much what the noobs have been clicking on before and not getting anywhere. So you need to be different from your competition!
  
  I think you actually had something, with the confusion that was caused above!! I think you need to inject a bit of humour and curiosity...some people have said they would not click something that said "make $0 in 6 weeks", but if you spice that up a bit...i would be like...wtf, i have to see what this loser is on about!!! Make Sense? So higher click-through rate!
  
  A struggling newbie is at the end of their teather and has had enough of the headlines that promise to deliver the earth...they are looking for something to cheer them up, without ramming it down their throat!
  
  Just my humble opinion!
  
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Essence 15 years ago

No, that's great! That's exactly the kind of thing that'll help me more successfully title my next WSO. I appreciate all feedback, whether it's a vote or 'none of the above'.

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Diana Lane 15 years ago

I thought 'hypey' too. Some of them didn't even make sense to me (maybe because it's 5am here and I've been up all night). 'Your couch could pay for it'? I probably read that one upside down. The one about 'Tired of looking at your empty bank account - this could be the last investment you'll ever make' sounds like you're addressing somebody so financially depressed that they're about to top themselves, and you're going to sell them the rope to do it.

Sorry, but I wouldn't have clicked on any of them either.
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artwebster 15 years ago

Since I have seen most of these before and didn't click on them then, I wouldn't click on them now, even with the minor alterations.
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- CmdrStidd 15 years ago
  
  Oh, wait a sec. Now that the poll is with it the posts do make more sense. However, I am afraid that I must join the ranks of the others. I am a broke noob and all those titles seemed either pie in the sky promises or out right scams in a couple of cases. I hope you do find a title that works.
  
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