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Can someone please review my sales page please. I have been basically playing around with a new plugin i bought.

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Thanks guys and go easy on me :-)
#page #review #sales
  • Profile picture of the author joseph7384
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    • Profile picture of the author FanPageLinks
      Hi. Thanks for your reply.

      I understand what u r saying but with a lot of sales pages does everyone read all the long content and my aim was to also limit the scrolling, as some people prefer not to scroll too much.

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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    This isn't a sales page because you are not selling anything.

    Having said that, it does a pretty good job of getting the message across. You probably could make things look a lot simpler. Although you have broken things into 3 steps, each of those steps still look quite complex for someone who is just starting out.

    I would make it a lot simpler.

    1. Copy this coupon code.

    1234hfjgkg

    2. Paste the coupon code into the site.

    [Have a screenshot that shows them exactly where to paste the coupon code]

    3. You're done.

    Why make it anymore complicated that that? The more complicated you make it the less conversions you will get. I also don't know why the coupon code needs to open in a new window. Once again, that's going to decrease conversions when people land on your page and see no coupon code. Just have it right there on the page and make it stand out like a sore thumb.

    I would also probably get rid of a lot of the yellow highlighting and exclamation marks. It just makes things look a little too hypey.
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  • Profile picture of the author Bruce Wedding
    You need a lot more yellow highlighting, especially in step 3.
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