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Fiverr post - opinions please?

by Dave3110
14 replies
Hi guys,

This is my first Fiverr post. (please see attached).

Here is the link

How do you find it. Any opinions/feedback would help me to improve. Thanks so much
#fiverr #opinions #post
  • Profile picture of the author BiggyJ
    "I will give you a ★★FANTASTIC★★ budgeting spreadsheet ★★which has already★★ help so many people turn there ★★financial situation around★★ for $5" Fix the grammar in the title at least. Will look a lot better
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    Get your share of Fiverr $$$ NOW!!
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    • Profile picture of the author Dave3110
      Originally Posted by BiggyJ View Post

      "I will give you a ★★FANTASTIC★★ budgeting spreadsheet ★★which has already★★ help so many people turn there ★★financial situation around★★ for $5" Fix the grammar in the title at least. Will look a lot better
      Oops! Thanks for that
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  • Profile picture of the author excloc
    My person opinion is that I would not buy it. Now I am not in bad financial shape so I can't really speak for those who are.

    I think the pull factor is a bit lacking. You might need to think about what would interest people.
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  • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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    Sorry, but the stars dont really scream "this guy knows finance".
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    • Profile picture of the author Dave3110
      Originally Posted by Joseph Robinson View Post

      Sorry, but the stars dont really scream "this guy knows finance".
      Thanks - I'm actually an accountant and was told by a friend that I needed these stars to attract people. Apparently my original looked too 'accountanty'. Looks like I should have stayed with that!
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      • Profile picture of the author Dave3110
        Thanks for the helpful feedback everyone, I really appreciate it!

        I've changed it to "I will give you a fantastic budgeting spreadsheet which has already helped so many people to budget more effectively for $5"

        I hope this is better!
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      • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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        Originally Posted by Dave3110 View Post

        Thanks - I'm actually an accountant and was told by a friend that I needed these stars to attract people. Apparently my original looked too 'accountanty'. Looks like I should have stayed with that!
        Think about it: you're trying to sell an accounting service. Wouldn't looking like an accountant be the easiest way to establish trust and credibility? Let your friend know that just because they see a trick used in their spam box it does not mean that it is an effective sales technique .
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        • Profile picture of the author RoboCod
          Maybe you should emphasize that the spreadsheet was developed by a qualified accountant - assuming you put it together yourself - for added credibility.

          While you won't get rich off Fiverr gigs, there could be a nice back-end offer - either further money management products, or converting someone to be a customer of your accountancy services.
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  • Profile picture of the author PureQuality
    the stars dont stand out to be professional... keep it simple and straight forward how will it help and dont use stars (:
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  • Profile picture of the author PureQuality
    Also there are definitely better sites out there that you can charge more money and have alot more buyers... so keep searching but fiverr is a good site to start out at
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  • Profile picture of the author John Atkins
    It's certainly much better now. With all those stars it looked
    really unprofessional.
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  • Profile picture of the author Linkology
    I used the link and noticed that you changed it, your new Headline is much better.
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  • Profile picture of the author VeskeyMedia
    also your description has a couple grammar issues

    "Have trouble budgeting or want to know where your money goes each and every month. (ADD ?) This easy to use spreadsheet will help you to overcome these problems. This is a tried and test (ADD test-ED), professional spreadsheet system that can be used to track or project your expenditure. With easily modifiable options to suit your day to day expenditure and an incredibly simple user interface, this will help you to keep track of what is going on in your wallet!"
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