How do you improve your writing?

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There are a lot of people capable of offering insights on this. I have already seen some and I am compiling it here. I am sure more will be on its way. Hopefully the syndicators help us out.

1) Write more (non-optional advice )
2) Read "Elements of Style"
3) Learn from good articles. Does any article cross your mind as you read this?By far the most engaging post I have ever read:

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4) Find a style of writing which suits you and keep working on it.

A tip from Joe(the disciple of Po) - If you want to get paid to improve your hand writing you can start off with constant content.
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Stephen King says: read a lot and write a lot. I agree. He's not talking about reading 'how to write' books. He means books in general.

    Coming from a guy who's sold 40 million books in his career, I listen.
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    • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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      Originally Posted by travlinguy View Post

      Stephen King says: read a lot and write a lot. I agree. He's not talking about reading 'how to write' books. He means books in general.

      Coming from a guy who's sold 40 million books in his career, I listen.
      He actually wrote a book "on writing" too if I recall correctly. Trying to hunt it down now. The man's Dark Tower series was absolutely epic.

      OP already included my best tip . Here's another: show it to strangers and ask for their opinions. I do this at the local bookstore all the time. It involves some cojones to go up to complete strangers and talk to them sometimes, but it is a skill that can be acquired through repetition.

      Having a set of eyes that aren't just attached to a prospect or fellow internet marketer can put your work into some real perspective.
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        • Profile picture of the author Geordie John
          Originally Posted by JaRyCu View Post

          Part 2: The Dark Tower is the best series of books ever written by an American. Period. The Stand is one of the best stand-alone books I've ever read also.
          Hmm i have the Dark Tower books but didn't really enjoy when i started reading the first one... maybes i should give them another go...
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          • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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            Originally Posted by Geordie John View Post

            Hmm i have the Dark Tower books but didn't really enjoy when i started reading the first one... maybes i should give them another go...
            Yeah, The Gunslinger is probably the weak point of the series. Books 2-3 are better paced and really get the story going. From book 4 (Wizard and Glass) on it's an absolutely fascinating story.
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        • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
          Originally Posted by JaRyCu View Post

          For someone who is a non-native writer, I'd suggest you start with Dilbert. And no, I'm not joking. Scott Adams is a great writer and he sums up the American workplace very succinctly in his comic strip. You can pick up a lot of colloquialisms from comic strips.
          Interesting and very true. Before Scott Adams became mainstream Bill Watterson was da man. He wrote Calvin and Hobbs for years. Talk about funny. But it was much more than just funny. That strip was a study in human psychology and behavior. I don't know why he quit because he was/is brilliant. Most of his work has been published in compilation volumes that still sell very well. Any aspiring writer would do well to read his stuff.

          As you can see I do believe in study but run from those nasty books that remind me of school where it was once legal to hit kids on the knuckles with stout wooden rulers for not knowing how to properly diagram a sentence. I was a notorious participle dangler. Ouch!
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      • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
        Originally Posted by Joseph Robinson View Post

        He actually wrote a book "on writing" too if I recall correctly. Trying to hunt it down now. The man's Dark Tower series was absolutely epic.

        OP already included my best tip . Here's another: show it to strangers and ask for their opinions. I do this at the local bookstore all the time. It involves some cojones to go up to complete strangers and talk to them sometimes, but it is a skill that can be acquired through repetition.

        Having a set of eyes that aren't just attached to a prospect or fellow internet marketer can put your work into some real perspective.
        Yep. Got On Writing when it came out. It's excellent, a real keeper. The first part of it is autobiographical and funny. He explains how he was pretty much a horror and sci fi geek obsessed with weird stories. Then how he began writing them. He transitions to his own take on the craft, how he struggled writing short stories for a market that was rapidly disappearing.

        The second half of the book is all about writing, his take on it anyway. There are a few writing exercises and some sound, simple advice on grammar. There are not a lot of amazing groundbreaking revelations on writing, not for me anyway. He says it's all about reading a lot and writing a lot.

        King doesn't plot stories as many authors do. He says he has an idea and builds upon it by creating characters that end up coming to life and making moves that he admits sometimes surprise him. The book is loaded with practical advice for writers. It think the best thing about it is that it illustrates how an oddball, everyday person with some talent and a relentless drive to get published can make it big.

        The thing I really love about this book is the casual writing style. You're learning and laughing as you go but none of it is formal instruction like so many stuffy writing books. It's like you're talking to an old friend about the craft. I read it for about the 10th time last month. I get something new every time. Check around used book stores, there are lots of copies floating around.
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        • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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          Originally Posted by travlinguy View Post

          King doesn't plot stories as many authors do. He says he has an idea and builds upon it by creating characters that end up coming to life and making moves that he admits sometimes surprise him. The book is loaded with practical advice for writers. It think the best thing about it is that it illustrates how an oddball, everyday person with some talent and a relentless drive to get published can make it big.

          The thing I really love about this book is the casual writing style. You're learning and laughing as you go but none of it is formal instruction like so many stuffy writing books. It's like you're talking to an old friend about the craft. I read it for about the 10th time last month. I get something new every time. Check around used book stores, there are lots of copies floating around.
          The above is why I really relate to him, at least as far as fictional writing goes. I jsut can't force myself to sit down and write a plot. In my few attempts at fiction I just create my characters and let them do what they do.

          He's definitely a relatable person. I never really got why there was that stigma that he is "scary", but it might just be because my first exposure to him was FaithfulFaithful . Obviously being a fellow New Englander didn't hurt his case either .
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          • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
            Originally Posted by Joseph Robinson View Post

            I just can't force myself to sit down and write a plot. In my few attempts at fiction I just create my characters and let them do what they do.
            ^^This. I've been doing a sort of informal study of fiction writers for the past couple of months. There are a lot more people who work this way than I thought. I'm definitely one. I probably stayed away from writing fiction for a long time because I listened to people who insisted you have to write with a story outline and a definite idea of how everything unfolds. That just doesn't work for me.

            One of my writing heroes is Kurt Vonnegut. That's pretty unusual because the man was an admitted fatalist, to extremes. I'm exactly the opposite. But it was his personal philosophy that made his stories so freakin' unique and readable. This guy had a remarkable imagination. He made some outrageously wild ideas seem commonplace.

            Vonnegut actually taught freshman college level creative writing classes in New England well after he made the big time. His thing was simple. Create a character who wants something and turn him loose. That might sound pretty vague but he did well with it. When he started he published three "conventional" novels. They were all excellent and filled with irony and lots of thought fodder. But they were nothing compared to the radical stuff that later put him on the map. No one writes like this guy. My point is, he's another genius who never plotted.

            I'm starting to twitch. I'm putting the finishing touches on a story that started as short and has turned into a 30,000-word novella with a sequel. Now I feel like writing...
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  • Profile picture of the author Halcyon
    Read, write, read, read, read, write, write, write, write.
    See the pattern?

    Great race car drivers watch races, great football players watch games, great writers read.

    There are tons of techniques offered by this one and that one to improve your writing but nothing is as effective as reading actual books and sitting down to actually write.
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  • Profile picture of the author moiza
    I think that it is well known that reading is the best tool for writing well, but with new technologies we do are no longer accustomed of reading as we used to and it no longer matters to write correctly because news issued matter most than how it is written. and worse and worse now the word is written that'' the manner that you can hear them just to make fun on news papers etc..
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    • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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      Originally Posted by moiza View Post

      I think that it is well known that reading is the best tool for writing well, but with new technologies we do are no longer accustomed of reading as we used to and it no longer matters to write correctly because news issued matter most than how it is written. and worse and worse now the word is written that'' the manner that you can hear them just to make fun on news papers etc..
      Speak for yourself lol. Great writing is probably more important than ever. In fact, with all of the crap that is being spewed across the web, well written content is becoming it's own unique selling proposition. Sad? Yes. But it is what it is.
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    • Profile picture of the author MissTerraK
      Originally Posted by moiza View Post

      I think that it is well known that reading is the best tool for writing well, but with new technologies we do are no longer accustomed of reading as we used to and it no longer matters to write correctly because news issued matter most than how it is written. and worse and worse now the word is written that'' the manner that you can hear them just to make fun on news papers etc..
      Huh?

      The only thing I did understand is that you're saying that it doesn't matter if you can't write well due to new technology as long as the information is correct.

      Well, I can quite honestly say that I've never seen a piece written in texting lingo be on a best sellers list.

      Other than that, I can only groan!

      Terra
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    • Profile picture of the author RoboCod
      Originally Posted by moiza View Post

      I think that it is well known that reading is the best tool for writing well, but with new technologies we do are no longer accustomed of reading as we used to and it no longer matters to write correctly because news issued matter most than how it is written. and worse and worse now the word is written that'' the manner that you can hear them just to make fun on news papers etc..
      Given that I could barely even understand what that means, it's not going to make me take action or change my point of view on anything...so that kind of undermines your point!

      Five ways to write better:

      1. Relax. I know some incredibly funny and inspiring people who sit down to write an email and turn into robots: "Dear sir, you might find it of interest that..." Just relax.

      2. Read 'On Writing Well' by William Zinsser. I thought I was a good writer, then I read that book and realized I wasn't. It was written in the 1970s but its messages about clarity and simplicity have never been more relevant.

      3. Write 1000 words every day. That was my resolution for 2012, and I've actually stuck to it. The difference it's made is phenomenal.

      4. I can't post links, but Google "James Altucher unusual tips to be a better writer". It's unconventional but brilliant.

      5. Don't obsess over grammar, but confusions like their/there, your/you're can trip readers up to the point they don't get what you're talking about and give up. It's really not that hard.
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  • Profile picture of the author johnpea
    The way I approach it is to get myself in the right frame of mind for the approach I'm taking. (didactic, romantic, cheeky etc) then imagine that I'm talking to someone in that frame of mind. The language I use changes accordingly, without my even having to think about it.
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  • Profile picture of the author koppster
    There is a writing group here i suggest you join it
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  • Profile picture of the author Sue Nelson
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    I agree with everything that has been said here. Writing comes after reading, that is for sure!
    I also want to thank for some useful tips and links!

    But...we must not forget an important ingredient when writing, as in everything we do: you must LOVE what you are doing. It will come to you easier.

    Good luck with writing, everyone :-)

    Sue
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  • Profile picture of the author Bruce NewMedia
    Reading good literature can do more to help you write better than almost anything. Of course you still have to write, too, but your subconscious embeds all the well-written prose. Later when you're writing, it accesses that resource...automatically.
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    • Profile picture of the author Gail_Curran
      I'm pleased to see so many people recommend reading as the way to improve your writing. After all, if you've never read good prose, how can you possibly create it?

      Originally Posted by Bruce NewMedia View Post

      Reading good literature can do more to help you write better than almost anything. Of course you still have to write, too, but your subconscious embeds all the well-written prose. Later when you're writing, it accesses that resource...automatically.
      Well put, and very true.

      Reading forums doesn't count as reading. In fact, reading just about anything on the Internet doesn't count. This is because 1) most written material on the Internet is crap and 2) reading words on a screen is physically and neurologically different from reading words on the printed page.

      You need to read real books, on any topic that interests you. Fiction, non-fiction, doesn't matter. Printed magazines are acceptable reading material, too.

      Good (or even decent) writers don't need to think about grammar and usage as they write. They know how a certain grammatical construction works because they've read it thousands of times. They know how the words should sound in the mind. Most writers still get tripped up on a few rules, but in general, competent writers write correctly and fluently without giving grammar much thought.
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      • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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        Originally Posted by Gail_Curran View Post

        Good (or even decent) writers don't need to think about grammar and usage as they write. They know how a certain grammatical construction works because they've read it thousands of times. They know how the words should sound in the mind. Most writers still get tripped up on a few rules, but in general, competent writers write correctly and fluently without giving grammar much thought.
        This is definitely something that a lot of people don't realize Gail. The best writers don't often have to spend 20-30% of their writing time checking for spelling/grammar mistakes because they have seen so much that it comes naturally. Reading can be just as good a practice for writing as the actual task of writing itself.

        I'm not saying that great writers don't make mistakes or proofread though. Heck, I still catch errors in my own work long after publishing from time to time. No one's perfect, but if the content is well written and your errors aren't numerous you can get away with one or two slip-ups.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rose Anderson
    "There is no great writing, only great rewriting."
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    Read what you write out loud. You can often hear when the writing doesn't flow well.

    Let your personality show through in your writing. Stop thinking about writing essays in school and think about writing an email to a good friend.

    Try to let what you've written sit for a day and then go back for a rewrite. In most cases web writing should be friendly, informative, and engaging. By rewriting you take out all the excess chit-chat and make the writing more concise.

    AND ... don't let anyone tell you that reading is no longer important. (I'd better not even say what I think of this "advice")
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    • Profile picture of the author cashp0wer
      Ditto on Stephen King - you can't go wrong by reading On Writing. Dark Tower series is also my favorite series ever written. I've read all of his books and I am also a voracious reader. You get better by practicing a lot. You can also learn by reading.
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      • Profile picture of the author MissTerraK
        I concur on reading being a vital ingredient to improve your writing skills. Reading books in a plethora of genres is helpful as well, especially if you are a ghostwriter or freelancer as clients ask for different writing tones for different projects.

        Practicing writing is another great exercise for improving your writing skills.

        One exercise I've used in the past, is to choose a topic and then write a piece in different writing styles. For example, write one in a humorous tone, another with the same topic in an informational tone, another using a parable for comparison, another using examples targeted for women, another with examples targeted for men write another in story form...well, you get the picture.

        You will find that the more you read and write, the more you do improve.

        Oh, and another Stephen King fan here.

        Terra
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  • Rose,

    I so agree with what you are saying about, "Read what you write out loud."

    It clarifies the message and really removes the excess, creating a much more engaging piece.

    I recently did an audio reading of one of my blog posts and by the time I was done reading it out loud, I had to adjust about 4 or 5 sentences... In the end I had a better blog post and audio version.

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  • Profile picture of the author usc4seven
    I've found the best way to improve my writing is to send out split tests and see which performs better. Over time you'll become a better writer. Good Luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author GSMarketing
    Hi,

    I know a lot of people say read, read and read, and I can't argue with that. My gf is a shining example, 1st year of Uni, couldn't write a bean, read every day for 2-3 hours, knocked out an exceptional 10k word dissertation no problem.

    However, I'm going to come at this from a different angle.

    Watch TV!!!!

    Now stay with me for a minute....

    The main problem I find when reading online content is TONE. You are using these words to communicate with your customer/reader so you have to talk to them how they like to be spoken to. TV can be an excellent medium for learning this, which in turn will impact dramatically on your writing.

    For example, I've been writing a lot lately for my golf site. Therefore I sit and watch a number of successful golf shows on TV. I listen to the wording they use, how they emphasise ceratin aspects etc. This all helps to improve my writing.

    Now, I may not be the most accompolished writer and my grammar probably leaves a LOT to be desired but the average person online isn't looking for the worlds best written piece, they are looking for a great piece of information that talks to them in a manner they understand (my opinion here).

    Cheers

    G
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    • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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      Originally Posted by GSMarketing View Post

      Watch TV!!!!
      It's definitely a viable idea, as long as you can stay focused on the task at hand lol. I'd top it off by suggesting that you should have face to face conversations with people within your niche. Then you're not just watching and hearing the inflection that speakers use, but practicing and refining your technique as well.
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    • Profile picture of the author Rose Anderson
      Originally Posted by rachelsjohnas View Post

      I accept begin that aggravating to address a atypical appropriate abroad didn't work. I just capital to get assimilate the computer and pen an amazing book, but, through the advance of the project, I accomplished that my autograph abilities just weren't up to that level. In adjustment to address a book, you accept to plan every footfall of the way. Second, you accept be a actual accomplished biographer and feel acceptable about your writing. Last, you charge a abutment accumulation that can apprehend you capacity and accord you appraisal and feedback.
      Consider this: abounding atypical writers began with autograph abbreviate stories.
      Finally... a post we can ALL agree on!!!

      (Sorry, I couldn't resist.)
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  • Profile picture of the author Riggs
    In answer to your rhetorical question, it appears everyone has neglected to mention the word Thesaurus. This adequately indicates they have failed to auspiciously answer your rudimentary question with decorous logical accuracy.

    Derp.
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  • Profile picture of the author CurtisSWN
    Writing definitely is a skill, sometimes when I don't feel "into it" I can still write coherently because I've acquired the skill of seeing clearly what I need to say, and then letting the words crystallize in my mind. Sometimes it feels like wading through a bog, but you can still be productive.

    Make it a point to write, obviously. Better yet, learn to get into the mind of your reader; i.e. what does he/she need/want, etc.
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