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Need feedback on my first landing page

by durseo
10 replies
Here is a link of a mockup for my landing page, Untitled Document

I need feedback on what I can do to improve on my sales page.
I also need suggestions on having upsells for my $20 ebook on alternative healing.
#feedback #landing #page
  • Profile picture of the author jenbac
    The page takes longer to load.
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  • Profile picture of the author michaelplies
    very nice, But it's hard to find the email submit form, maybe make it a bit bigger or an arrow pointing at it.
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  • Profile picture of the author tac88
    Did you find that your squeeze on the left side converts better then the right or something? It also seem as if it's missing a sub heading or something were you have the sky. Very nice ...
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  • Profile picture of the author Dinuvenkat
    SEO is the best way of getting the free traffic from Search engines.
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    It's VERY slow to load even on a super fast connection. I'm guessing that's just because it's images at the moment and won't be once it's a real page?

    I would probably refrain from asking for an email and name before someone clicks the add to cart button.
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  • Profile picture of the author hajro
    Split image to 10 parts then insert on website, it will load quickly...
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    • Profile picture of the author grifflj
      It's not bad, but it could use a much stronger headline. I also agree with that the entire piece should be broken into smaller images to load faster.
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    • Profile picture of the author Mattias
      I think it looks really nice !
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  • Profile picture of the author nasuryono
    Here's my feedback:

    1. Change the title. Don't call it "Untitled Document"
    2. Avoid using too many graphical elements. The page loads way too slow here.
    3. There are no clear sign pointing to the opt-in box so people will be confused on what to do there.

    That's my 2 cents.
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  • Profile picture of the author UltimateFaqih
    i think , The Page Take Longer to load, my recommendations check your site on google page speed .
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