Is my Header ok? Web Deisgner's Advice Needed

by Aaron Elliott

Posted: 16 years ago 38 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

Can I please get some feedback on this header, Im no expert with photoshop so any advice will help : ) Thanks!

#advice #deisgner #header #needed #web

Roger Mayne 16 years ago

Hi

I had a quick look at your header. It looks ok, but the small purple text looks a little out of focus. Try playing around with the anti aliasing to see if you can make it crisper.

Maybe try without the word "your" also, so that the smaller text fits in with the larger text.
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Jamie Iaconis 16 years ago

Hi,

It doesn't look too bad to me...

I like the colors and layout!

I like it.

Jamie
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Aaron Elliott 16 years ago

Oh Please ignore the blur, it only happened once I uploaded to this forum - think it got shrunk a tad. I will see how it looks without the your : )

Thanks Jamie, this was my main concern colour scheme..
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Oscar D 16 years ago

I like it, the graphic work is good.

Well done, go a head and use it!
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Roger Mayne 16 years ago

I prefer the new version. Looks a lot more balanced now. Good job!
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InternetMarketingCenter 16 years ago

"Search" is cute graphically, but not immediately recognizable for what it is.
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- Sheryl Polomka 16 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by InternetMarketingCenter
  
  "Search" is cute graphically, but not immediately recognizable for what it is.
  
  I have to agree, the word 'search' is cute, but it doesn't really look like the word 'search'. I wonder if you could perhaps include a couple more letters and less people or something to make it more recognisable.
  
  Other than that I really like it - I like the word LIVE with that font I think it looks good.
  
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  Shlomi Khutoretsky 16 years ago
  
  i like it, clean and minimalistic.
  
  but i could not read the last word - so it's kind of a problem, people like to understand from their first look where they arrived at.
  
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  askloz 16 years ago
  
  Looks good, but no need to use that size, save it as png, with transparent background, then it'll be resizable to say 750px, simply align it in the middle for smaller browsers/resolutions
  
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- koolwarrior Banned 16 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by InternetMarketingCenter
  
  "Search" is cute graphically, but not immediately recognizable for what it is.
  
  I agree. If you didn't have that caption beneath your logo, I would've never know you were trying to say 'search' using the silhouettes of people.
  
  It looks good, except for that one part.
  
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Allanon24 16 years ago

The Header looks nice to me. The search word is cute however do not forget that the more the visitor has to think what it means ,the sooner he will leave your site.

Just sg. to think about...
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kswr123 16 years ago

I would honestly strip jokerman font and use TW cen MT condensed, with bold applied to it. Also, I would make the search a little more recognisable.
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Aaron Elliott 16 years ago

Thanks for all the input, taking it all into consideration. saq3m has offered to help me with my header, he is a graphic designer! Thanks mate. Ill post the final header before friday
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Kim Davis 16 years ago

I like it but I had to come back to this forum to figure out what the last word was supposed to be.
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FlightGuy 16 years ago

I think its clean, but "Search" should be more recognizable in my opinion. Work on "Search" and you'll have a winner!
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steve m 16 years ago

Does the S lots of people H mean search?

Other then that looks fine
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ankita 16 years ago

Hi,
I agree with Matt. Need to b change the font of the word "Live" & the word "Search" is not clearly radeable or in other words not recogised easily.
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kswr123 16 years ago

Ok I have redesigned the header, and Flightguy will post the final here for you to judge!

Mubarak
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Marty S 16 years ago

My grade three teacher used to say to me, "Marty this is a Do Over". Sorry to say but I think that's what this banner/header should be too.
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Stephen Saha 16 years ago

Sorry. But I'm still not impressed.
A great professional logo can be made for it.
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kswr123 16 years ago

dont worry Stephen!

We are working behind the scenes

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Aaron Elliott 16 years ago

Thanks Mubarak for your help, for now I have put up the temp version at Free People Searches

Thanks again : )
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kswr123 16 years ago

Thanks! Anyone else have any feedback for the new design?

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- Marty S 16 years ago
  
  Ok, much better but...
  
  The tag line is redundant to the banner, and needs to be something more exciting. How about something like...
  
  "They're out there somewhere"
  "Investigation nation"
  "Where are they now"
  "Anybody, anystate"
  
  Also, this layout brings to mind Google, which is good, but I would resize/bold the search box and main description to make it more prominent, then add some spacing and then rest of the stuff (smaller text), which to me is adding distraction to conversions anyway.
  
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BloomerBeak 16 years ago

it looks good. Great job!
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Lucky500 16 years ago

I realy liked it, very professional!
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kswr123 16 years ago

Thanks for the positive responses to my design!

It's up to kitejunkie though!
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CPA 16 years ago

It looks really well!
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kswr123 16 years ago

Thanks! It is always nice when your designs are commended
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Aaron Elliott 16 years ago

Ok the final design is up - www.livePeopleSearch.ws . Thanks again Mubarak Waseem for keeping the design how I wanted it but making it MUCH better. thanks so much for your help, next time I need a header or a logo I will come and see you!

Also Marty S, thanks for those suggestions, Ive got my HTML editor out now and playing around with the site.
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Andrea Brown 16 years ago

Looks great!

But in my browser (Firefox), the website is too wide and I have to scroll all the way over to center the content.
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Aaron Elliott 16 years ago

Thanks for that ambrown, fixed it both vert and horz now!
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pdrw07 16 years ago

Look nice but what I learn from another designer, the words "Your Free People Search" Must have the same end with the Upper word.

But overall is Great
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dave830 16 years ago

on a non-design note, this site is pretty cool.

I found some old friends here when I never could locate them on other "people search" sites.

Great job, very intuitive and fast pages!
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- bt 16 years ago
  
  Hey Kitejunkiee, nice job on the header, I think It looks really good.
  
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Aaron Elliott 16 years ago

Thanks Dave! Glad it helped.

pdrw07 - not sure what you mean, you think also I should change the slogan, as Marty S suggested - to something other than "Your Free People Search"?

I really want to make it clear that its Free, thats why I picked the current slogan. Sure there are paid services on this site, but the main function is free for the user.

Thanks bt, but the credit must go to Mubarak Waseem. He really spiced it up nicely.
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kswr123 16 years ago

Thanks for that! It is always nice when your designs are commended.
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kswr123 16 years ago

Thanks udskiii!

I tried to make it minimalistic, but standing out...

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