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Hi warrior !

This is an paper advertisement campaign of one of my client.
Starting with 2 teaser advertisement & then a full page adv. comes !

Plz give me your precious feedback on this.

Regards
Ankita
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  • It is open in my machine ! I Chek !
  • Some excellent graphics! Dont stress, they look great!

    Good luck

    Paul
  • I AGREE WITH pAUL...Graphics are well done, no
    need to stress a lot

    Good luck
    Bhupinder
  • looks great
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    • The graphics are excellent and your client should be pleased!
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  • Graphics are great - Dubai - NOT dubai
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    • Good catch there! I had to go back and double check. You've got some eyes on you.
  • The banner campaign looks so fine and looks so very eye catching to the future buyers. Suggestion to make you must also put some convincing words of wisdom in your banner campaign to attract more visitors or more buyers.
  • Great looking graphics. I love it. I also like how it's unique. Good job!
  • Beautiful graphics!
  • Very nice backgrounds . You could work more on the typography. Bet on bigger font-size. Aim to attract attention and not making the reader to peer at your ads.

    I hope this was helpful...
  • Nice work. Just a small tip: increase the font size. Overall, nicely done!
  • Yeah, I agree they look great but a larger font would help.
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  • Hi everybody !

    I m so thankful for your all precious suggestions. This advertisement get approved by the client & it is to b published in the next edition.

    Regards
    Ankita
  • Ankita,

    Great graphics, but like has been pointed out need to work on the font size and typos. Also perhaps you could ask a thought provoking question to put your self in the minds of your prospective clients on the teaser logos.
  • This is some very nice work. Is it ok to add you as a contact? I'm looking for a colleague that I can forward work to, who has the capability of applying balance and color like this.

    Grant
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    • Hi Grant,
      ya you can ad me !

      Regards
      ankita
  • I don't have much of an eye for graphic design on things like this, I think they look good.

    But aside from that: YOU HAVE A DUBAI REAL ESTATE AGENCY HIRING YOU TO DO THEIR ADVERTISING?!?!?!?!

    I hope you are getting paid in gold bricks or suitcases of money or something. That is quite literally the most expensive real estate market on the planet. period.

    very impressive landing such a job.

    -Rebtl
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    • Hi Rebt,
      Like your comment. This is my first job with this real estate. I get this job from one of my friends contact. I work so hard for this project. Hope we'll go long .
  • I like the look of the smaller ones but make the text bigger (small text looks cool but words sell!!). i find the larger one a bit confusing - and compared to the smaller ones it looks 'ugly' - I'm just being honest.

    Ex Grahpic Designer...
    :-) B
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    • Hi Beau,
      I appreciate your views.
      This advertisement is already approved & ready to b published.
      This artwork is Launching advt. First two ad. are teaser ad & the big one is the full page ad. The key shows the whole dubai & the chain link to it is the map of Dubai. Means in a Dubai a new real property is going to b launched. Thats the basic concept. I hope now you can change your mind regarding this layout.

      Regards
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  • I agree with the majority. It looks great! excellent job.
  • Looks great! You are missing a "y" on property in the second paragraph on the larger ad. Minor, but important. Good job!
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    • The graphics are well done but the black writing on the largest image is hard to make out.
  • well done i love em






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