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New Site Would Appreciate Any Critiques

by 181liquid
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I'm new to IM but I've taken action-am I going in a healthy direction???
I'm in the health market. I make my own product, and my niche is creating healthy programs with my products-such as kidney, prostate, fibroids, ect. Do I monetize the site-how do I get targeted traffic-what else do I need to add to the site???
I write my own content...

THANKS FOR ALL THE HELP!!!

a healthy prostate now
#critiques #site
  • Profile picture of the author laurencewins
    You said you write your own content. There are grammatical errors throughout the site. It is very basic. I don't know if you plan to keep it that way. YOu have a very limited audience of course. But fixing your content would help you. Apart from that, the site looks ok for what it is.But it doesn't stand out from other websites and isn't very appealing to the average viewer.
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    Cheers, Laurence.
    Writer/Editor/Proofreader.

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  • Profile picture of the author 181liquid
    Thank you much appreciate...
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  • Profile picture of the author contentwriting360
    Banned
    with my products-such as kidney, prostate, fibroids, ect.
    Are these your own products or somebody else's?
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    • Profile picture of the author 181liquid
      mines and my herbalist
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  • Profile picture of the author xInd
    Do you have an affiliate program yet? There is a great affiliate system plugin for wordpress at wpmudev.org or if you'd like to sign up with my affiliate link here it is: Premium WordPress Themes, Plugins & Support - WPMU DEV

    Do you purchase any traffic to your sales page for your product?
    Focusing on your own product sales is the best way to monetize your site really.
    Too many ads takes away from that, but a couple nice ones here and there are ok, you might have better revenue from CPA in your niche than google adsense, but that's just a guess coming from me, I don't have a lot of experience in this niche yet.
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  • Profile picture of the author FrancoArda
    I'm not sure whether starting with the price is a good idea ...
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  • Profile picture of the author XYZcontent
    I would personally remove the price tag from the main page. Trying to sell without giving any prior information is like shooing your potential customers away before they even had the chance of reading any useful information about the product.

    I would personally change the color of the website also, i'd change it to a "healthier" color if you know what I meen (like green-ish or blue to transmit trust).

    Another thing you need to remove are the spelling errors that are spread over your website. Whenever I see spelling mistakes on websites that are trying to sell me something I immediately back off or atlteast trust it less.

    I'm sure there are more things you could improve/change, but start with the stuff I mentioned (if you want ofcouse).
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    • Profile picture of the author brienn
      agree with "laurencewins", you have text errors and is quite poor content. try to write more content
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  • Profile picture of the author Griffin Smith
    Originally Posted by 181liquid View Post

    I'm new to IM but I've taken action-am I going in a healthy direction???
    I'm in the health market. I make my own product, and my niche is creating healthy programs with my products-such as kidney, prostate, fibroids, ect. Do I monetize the site-how do I get targeted traffic-what else do I need to add to the site???
    I write my own content...

    THANKS FOR ALL THE HELP!!!
    Whoa doggie...

    (I mean no offense and this purely constructive criticism)

    You've got to fix the copy on that page, there are grammar errors everywhere.

    If you're trying to market to people in this US, reading that page is a turn off (At least for me anyway) it looks like you either spun something or just copied and pasted a bunch of related materiel on "healthy prostate"

    I would:

    • Completely rewrite that whole page (Make it conversational, like you're talking to a friend)
    • Get testimonials on there ASAP!
    • I'm totally confused on how to order your product (It looks like you put a contact form in your comment box?
    • Get a video or a pic on there explaining the benefits of "Prostate Health Program"
    Get those worked out first and then work on driving traffic to a page that'll actually convert


    ~Griffin Smith
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  • Profile picture of the author fabriano
    Couple suggestions from me.

    Headline - the first thing you can catch people's attention. I don't see any headline there ?
    everything mixed together, don't know where to read.

    Normally, the headline starts with a problem that your target market have.
    Example, headache stops you from doing what you love ?

    and then the solution - xxxxxx

    2 you want to focus on the benefits. All you have here is features.
    Features don't sell, benefits do.
    Features is all about you, benefits is for the buyers.
    Think from the buyers, what is in it for me ?

    Omega 3 oil ( feature ) => keep my skin younger ( benefit )

    Hope this helps.
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    Love Fabriano

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