Review my lens please

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Hey Warriors,

I have this lens The New Feeling - Binaural Tones up for a year now and it is on top of googles list for the search binaural tone and binaural tones. Can you help me improve my lens so that it offers more and converts more.

Thanks

Naithan
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  • Profile picture of the author dmhinman
    Hi Naithan, Your lens is good, but the problem is people don't understand what you are talking about. Maybe put in a text module putting it in laymans terms would draw more visitors. I have been writing lenses for awhile myself (Squidoo : Explore Lenses) and am starting to make good money. I spent alot of time viewing videos on youtube. The best ones that helped me were by cashcoachnet. He offers the best free advice on getting traffic, backlinks and what modules to use. Good Luck, Duane.
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  • Profile picture of the author Naithan
    Nice tip dmhinman, for me it seems natural what it means and what it is used for, but know that I think about it, I can write a module in a bit more hyped language.
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  • Profile picture of the author Naithan
    Hi 7digital

    I absolutely believe in truly works, because I listen to it on a daily basis. It can get me into different states. Relax more, feel rejuvenated, feel focused everything it says it can do it does. But that is just my opinion from experience, feel free to try it for yourself.

    Thanks again for your input.

    Naithan
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  • Profile picture of the author John Pawlett
    Hi Naithan

    Nice lens, well SEO'ed (is that a word!) a couple of things you could do is add a few more tags, off the top of my head I believe you are allowed 40 and you should use alt tags on your images.

    Kind regards

    John
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    • Profile picture of the author seobro
      I bought some hemisync tapes years ago and have XLent results. The problem is what are you selling? I did not see any MP3 download for the binaural beats. Try to highlight the product you are pushing.
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    • Profile picture of the author queenofdreamers
      Could you explain to me how to add the alt tags to photos? I have been having a difficult time with that one.

      I would also like to know how everyone is adding their links on their signatures here where the links are clicked on without showing...




      Originally Posted by John Pawlett View Post

      Hi Naithan

      Nice lens, well SEO'ed (is that a word!) a couple of things you could do is add a few more tags, off the top of my head I believe you are allowed 40 and you should use alt tags on your images.

      Kind regards

      John
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      • Profile picture of the author elsvirtual
        Originally Posted by queenofdreamers View Post

        Could you explain to me how to add the alt tags to photos? I have been having a difficult time with that one.

        I would also like to know how everyone is adding their links on their signatures here where the links are clicked on without showing...
        Look for this in your html: alt=""

        PLace whatever words you want between the quotes, like this: alt="words"

        Hope this helps.

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        • Profile picture of the author Max Ramocsai
          It looks pretty good overall but it could definitely use improvement. One of the first things that you should consider doing is adding a call to action right below your intro section. If you've grasped the reader's attention by the end of the intro paragraph then you could have yourself an easy sale.

          Another thing is that while your lens does have a lot of nice and original content it is still rather unorganized and lacking. You include a somewhat "scientific" explanation of what a binaural beat is but you don't go any further than that. A visitor might get the impression that you are simply copying and pasting dry info that you got somewhere else.

          If I were you, I'd include a "scientific" explanation as well as an explanation done in a down to earth kind of way. Let the reader know that you know what a binaural beat means but also make it easy for them to understand.

          Lastly, you should really consider putting a greater emphasis on the benefits of using binaural beats. You don't have a section for this and I think it would help tremendously with making sales. You see, right now you've introduced the reader to a bunch of technical information but you haven't really told them why they should listen or be interested in binaural beats in the first place.

          Hope this could help.
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  • Profile picture of the author FranMurray
    I have no clue what the lens is talking about... I am not sure what you are "selling" when you say converting. Do you mean driving traffic to your blog? Not trying to be a jerk ... Not sure what the point of the lens is though. Nice formatting though.
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  • Profile picture of the author Naithan
    Thanks for all your replies.

    Yeah, I will change the big arrow module.
    I am making sales already on cd's. But I will try and focus it more on one product.

    @alyonafrendp I am getting about 30 visits a week which are nearly all from google.
    @John Pawlett Thanks for the compliment and thanks for mentioning those helpfull little tips.

    Naithan
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  • Profile picture of the author kayaker
    Nathan, I must say that lens was pretty cool. Good job!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Mike Hersh
    Cloak your affiliate link my friend. If one like me will visit your site he will probably buy using your affiliate link because I know how much work you did. Other people will just buy without you involved so change it.

    Good Luck.

    Mike G
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