First Comparission Article, Feedback Appreciated!

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So I just wrote my first comparison article on my amazon niche site, would love to hear everyone's thoughts. Thanks!

Bose SEI2i vs Monster iSport Immersion Earphones - Review | In Ear Headphones Reviewed
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    • Thank you, I appreciate your candid honesty, I went through and made changes based on your input, thanks again!
  • I would slash verbiage - too wordy

    I would do away with the Amazon "Buy Now"
    link because it shoots your credibility in the can.

    Recognize that *if* you've hooked the
    reader they trust you and you'd be better with
    something like "Click here for best price".

    Original images can only help you - avoid stock
    photos. Show people things the manufacturer
    won't show them - show that you've honestly
    put your hands on these things.
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    • What do you mean by Verbage? I had heard lots of people say that using the buy now option can help prevent high bounce rate, from those going to amazon from an external link.

      Should the Click here for best price just be text, or would spending the money on or create a bottom that matches my theme be a good idea?
  • It looks good. Give some star rating and use tables for comparison that will be easy for your readers to compare the product in one table and buy it.
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    • K Mec! I have been looking for a star plugin, any suggestions?
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