First Comparission Article, Feedback Appreciated!

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So I just wrote my first comparison article on my amazon niche site, would love to hear everyone's thoughts. Thanks!

Bose SEI2i vs Monster iSport Immersion Earphones - Review | In Ear Headphones Reviewed
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  • Profile picture of the author Joseph Robinson
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    • Profile picture of the author zspuckl
      Originally Posted by Joseph Robinson View Post

      Comfort: You didn't qualify silicone being more comfortable than foam. You just said it.

      Staying Power: For me at least it invokes the image of which headphones are going to last longer, not stay in my ear longer. Find a better headline.

      Sound: " the Monsters are terrible, they just fall short to the Bose SEI2i headphones" That pain you're feeling? It's because you just shot yourself in the foot. The monsters are terrible; but only a little less terrible than Bose. That is what you are saying. Nobody is going to want to buy either now. You completely skipped midtones as well. If you aren't going to talk about them don't mention them.

      Cost: Took like 6 readthroughs to understand that. Why are we starting with add-on accesory costs for one of the models?

      Style: I don't care what you like, I'm going to wear the headphones. Explain how the style benefits me.

      Our Winner Is: Bose, but buy the Monsters maybe? Kind of gives away that you're chasing money here.

      Overall, very average. I wouldn't place money on it accomplishing the goal you would like it to (a sale).
      Thank you, I appreciate your candid honesty, I went through and made changes based on your input, thanks again!
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  • Profile picture of the author .X.
    I would slash verbiage - too wordy

    I would do away with the Amazon "Buy Now"
    link because it shoots your credibility in the can.

    Recognize that *if* you've hooked the
    reader they trust you and you'd be better with
    something like "Click here for best price".

    Original images can only help you - avoid stock
    photos. Show people things the manufacturer
    won't show them - show that you've honestly
    put your hands on these things.
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    • Profile picture of the author zspuckl
      Originally Posted by .X. View Post

      I would slash verbiage - too wordy

      I would do away with the Amazon "Buy Now"
      link because it shoots your credibility in the can.

      Recognize that *if* you've hooked the
      reader they trust you and you'd be better with
      something like "Click here for best price".

      Original images can only help you - avoid stock
      photos. Show people things the manufacturer
      won't show them - show that you've honestly
      put your hands on these things.
      What do you mean by Verbage? I had heard lots of people say that using the buy now option can help prevent high bounce rate, from those going to amazon from an external link.

      Should the Click here for best price just be text, or would spending the money on or create a bottom that matches my theme be a good idea?
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  • Profile picture of the author K Mec
    It looks good. Give some star rating and use tables for comparison that will be easy for your readers to compare the product in one table and buy it.
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    • Profile picture of the author zspuckl
      K Mec! I have been looking for a star plugin, any suggestions?
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